The Former Structural Analyst's Otherworldly Adventure Story - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - My Family

[Kampfarsch]

They have fucking ridable dragons?? WHY DID THEY SEND THEIR KIDS ON A WEEK LONG JOURNEY THEN
Also what is wrong with the facial expression why way people react is so unnatural
Also why is the sick girl 7 and has no skills did she not get a blessing?

 

[coldb7]

Always good to have an MC who's not an edgy loner who keeps their op powers a secret, cause they got the I just want to live a normal life syndrome.

 

[ShionSinX]

Theres so many weird flashbacks and then back to present things every page, the pacing is all over the place.

Why she didnt try her skill into the vase back then instead of having a moral crisis of 'its wrong they are asleep'? Why didnt she improve the stats of people (more importantly, herself)? Takes seconds to increase lets say everyone's HP by a billion.

 

[Belkin]

I guess she was extremely smart and made everyone around her? I mean she was doing part of her parents work and kinda resent her for that.

 

[definitionofinsanity]

Is it just me or does this chapter seem disjointed as all fuck and jumping around without explanation? It's like they skipped several chapters in-between several pages of this chapter. I don't know, maybe I'm just having an off-day, but it's... very distorting to read to me for some reason.