The Former Structural Analyst's Otherworldly Adventure Story

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Now i found this gorgeous example, the crown jewel from the manga category:
"I bet it will be axed"
 

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I'd normally rate this an "average" purely out of respect for the art at least but this plot is so terrible that it's bopped down to "very bad"
 
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An interesting read, to me especially since I'm a trash manga/manhua/manwha reader, but is 28 the last chapter entirely? I was actually getting pretty hyped.
 
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There are some interesting things going on here but the foremost antagonist(s) really outstay their welcome due to being... incomprehensible. I have no idea what the author was thinking here but it's hard to be invested when we have other isekais that do each individual thing being done here, better.

I wouldn't mind except what is the point of it all? Setting aside the overarching plot issue, this work is riddled with cases of the minor plot points progressing in seemingly arbitrary, or rather contrived, ways. A coincidence or two can be overlooked but if I lose confidence in there ever being a proper plan I can only be disappointed.
 

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