The Life of a Returning Officer - Ch. 70

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Gotta love a badass older lady intimidating that guy surprised he didn’t get fired earlier but that’s life
 
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Storytelling in this chapter feels a bit forced.
This just makes it feel like it's a well plotted plan, like how a chess master can force you to make the last several moves whilst already knowing it's over for you.
Edit: which is fine once a while, but if it happens all the time it gets rather badly forced.
 

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