Grammar nazi rising.
Page 7: "Wenn man sich die Resultate der Qualifizierungen ansieht.", there were two typos.
Page9: "Ja, es läuft gut. Sie haben viele Fragen gestellt.", typo and better in two sentences. However The german is off the english by far in any case. Closely translated he's saying:" Yes, it went well. The asked a lot of questions." ,not "Yes, they asked a lot of questions." like in your version.
The german is also very stiff overall, not really like anyone would talk here. Especially not in Stuttgart.
Grammar rant over ?