The Mentor and the New Employee Who Gradually Change Each Other - Ch. 26

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Not sure if its the same girl from another one shot or not. Have to see her boobs more...
 
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Always offset vocatives with punctuation.
“Hello, Scott.”​
“Scott? Is that you?”​
“I hate you, Scott!”​
“You, Scott, need to find that cat.”​
I don't really see where this is relevant in this chapter. It all read just fine to me. Can you point out where they should have done this?
 

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