I don't really see where this is relevant in this chapter. It all read just fine to me. Can you point out where they should have done this?Always offset vocatives with punctuation.
“Hello, Scott.”“Scott? Is that you?”“I hate you, Scott!”“You, Scott, need to find that cat.”
Always offset vocatives with punctuation.
First page, second panel, first balloon.I don't really see where this is relevant in this chapter. It all read just fine to me. Can you point out where they should have done this?