The One Within the Villainess - Vol. 4 Ch. 18 - The Demon King Angel

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I felt bad cuz no one else is asking who that starstruck girl at the beginning is. That's far too much attention for a random mob so I knew I was forgetting someone. After a few pages the answer revealed itself.

She hadn't shown up since Remi searched for the armor.
 
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hm, must be quite the musical for 'all five senses' , wonder what would be the 'taste', if not also just food /drinks provided or so during, unless 'mana' has a 'taste' to it

Love the angel chibi 'keychain'(?) and acrylic stands tho lol
 
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I'm not convinced by this chapter... Crop rotation already existed in ancient Egypt. It was the number of fields (two, three or even four) and the specific crops grown on each that were refined from the Middle Ages onwards.

The last boom was the introduction of synthetic fertilisers.

In Remilia's world, you should already know a minimum crop rotation to sustain the population of these cities/kingdoms. The magically produced synthetic fertilisers would be revolutionary though.
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Though, I feel like this is not bad enough to break the suspension disbelief for the average reader.
 
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Ah I see so that's how you got more crops during harvest time
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ah the bit about it only being possible to sequester nitrogen via certain plants and specifically their roots is false. most if not all plants can do so they are just bad at it and it can be done via leaves and such
 
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Though, I feel like this is not bad enough to break the suspension disbelief for the average reader.
allowing fields to go fallow also works as it allows weeds to restore nutrient balance with the crops that can also be done with a mix of crops by having livestock graze as people harvest or afterwards. people can take the best crops and leave the rest to the livestock. the damage done by animals will be recovered from sooner due to the manure and the manure will seed the soil with bacteria and fungi that were killed by the sun hitting the exposed dirt. orchards with crops and livestock raised in the shade are better.
 
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Isekai authors are not known for their intellect. Which is why every single one introduces the same exact "innovations" to the place they are sent to. Innovations that often have existed for thousands of years on our planet, and make zero sense for them to not already have. I've seen Isekai Protags introduce water pumps and pulley and lever systems into worlds that are late medieval era, when those have existed since BCE on Earth. So either the planets they are going to are beyond stupid, or the Isekai authors are, guess which gets my vote?
this... isn't true at all.
the "introduction to improved fertilizer" IS the thing being introduced. that's the point. their world already knew about crop rotation, that isn't being introduced and isn't being treated as important. it's the introduction of allowing the fallow fields to be refertalised with animals and the beans but especially the overly important demon infused magic. it's the unique FERTILIZER and it's application that is important and that is being introduced
the real world ideas already exist in this world, and you being rude about the author just to seem high in mighty is fucked up.
 
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I’d wager the idea for agriculture that his thot Pina put forth has produced barely any fruits, plus there’s many other things working against her. Such as her draining funds. Either way he deserves it. Honestly, what merits has he brought forth as the crown prince? Barely a thing of his own power.

Also, I wonder if Emi really liked to study on various things, regardless of what they were or what use they’d be in her day to day living.
She’s was so knowledgeable and capable of bringing modern innovations into the real world.

Which you kinda need if you’re gonna isekai into another world.
Exactly, cause Pina didn't know the importance of compost fertilizer, and in this case, it's best when produced via mana. That lack of shared knowledge between Remilia and Emi is why Pina's plan failed while Remi's succeeded.

I'd read a comment here before that said "crop rotation already existed by this time, this is annoying" and they were half-right. What they missed were the deeper details, like mana usage, workforce acquisition, and influencing the business market. Most isekai don't really go as deep into it like that, so I'm glad this story does.
 
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this... isn't true at all.
the "introduction to improved fertilizer" IS the thing being introduced. that's the point. their world already knew about crop rotation, that isn't being introduced and isn't being treated as important. it's the introduction of allowing the fallow fields to be refertalised with animals and the beans but especially the overly important demon infused magic. it's the unique FERTILIZER and it's application that is important and that is being introduced
the real world ideas already exist in this world, and you being rude about the author just to seem high in mighty is fucked up.
This is it! This is what's been annoying me about those comments!!
 
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I'm not convinced by this chapter... Crop rotation already existed in ancient Egypt. It was the number of fields (two, three or even four) and the specific crops grown on each that were refined from the Middle Ages onwards.

The last boom was the introduction of synthetic fertilisers.

In Remilia's world, you should already know a minimum crop rotation to sustain the population of these cities/kingdoms. The magically produced synthetic fertilisers would be revolutionary though.
Yeah, and they talked about that a few chapters back. They specifically already know about crop rotation.
What the Willard didn't know about was adding the forage crops and allowing the cows to eat them. And what neither Willard nor Pina knew was that the process worked best because of the introduction of the manure as fertilizer.
Meanwhile, Remilia's emphasizing the importance of the fertilizer, even accentuating it by using demon mana, further putting a spotlight on the importance of demons and elevating their social status as contributors. That, plus Remilia constantly focuses on test trials and replicating results when possible. She's done that the entire manga. Meanwhile, Willard introduced the idea of putting the forage crops and animals without truly understanding how long it would take to work. Remilia's demon mana-infused fertilizer speeds that process up exponentially. Moreover, because of her land, she's had months to test it out.
Willard introduced an idea on an already half-known process based on incomplete information, whereas Remilia not only had data, but proven results. That's the main point.
I think too many readers got caught up by the word "crop rotation" and tuned everything else out.

EDIT: Ah, also, the context in which Remilia is speaking about crop rotation is to a dwarf, who, from what we saw, lives in a land underground and likely doesn't rely on farming for food nearly as much as people living in the plains. It's not like she's explaining the concept of crop rotation to a country. She's only introducing mana-infused fertilizer that works fast as heck. But to Princess Sara? This is likely new and potentially applicable information depending on how they get food to their underground lands.

That's why I find comments calling this chapter bad a tad irritating. And those saying the author is stupid are outright insulting, considering how little they actually read.
 
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this... isn't true at all.
the "introduction to improved fertilizer" IS the thing being introduced. that's the point. their world already knew about crop rotation, that isn't being introduced and isn't being treated as important. it's the introduction of allowing the fallow fields to be refertalised with animals and the beans but especially the overly important demon infused magic. it's the unique FERTILIZER and it's application that is important and that is being introduced
the real world ideas already exist in this world, and you being rude about the author just to seem high in mighty is fucked up.
this is currently happening with regenerative agriculture because conventional ag is so heavily subsidized its warping the economy so anyone that isnt subsidized isnt seen as viable even in regards to actually growing the crops because people think the conventionaly raised crops grow faster or are better because the gov is paying for it
 

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