On page 44 the word bridge is spelled wrong with the dg backwards making “brigde” but that’s the only mistake I saw. This was weird in a very funny way and I couldn’t help but think of the song “you’re the best around” during the little demon’s training montage.
I was digging this until she said she fell in love with him. If there is more proper friendship with them or more story, I could have accepted the couple.
But, this is a oneshot. So, I guess I just let it go.