The Overlord's Wish - Oneshot

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That was some cheesy lovestory but a decent oneshot nevertheless.

Though what are the 5 volumes in the first page referring to?

Edit: Found it. Seems to be a sidestory for Marry Grave
 
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On page 44 the word bridge is spelled wrong with the dg backwards making “brigde” but that’s the only mistake I saw. This was weird in a very funny way and I couldn’t help but think of the song “you’re the best around” during the little demon’s training montage.
 
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Uhhh, I have many questions about the anatomy, but otherwise sure. That's a perfectly normal ending.
 
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Come on man, I know Marry Grave had a rushed ending but this ending is just a little too syrupy.
 
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I was digging this until she said she fell in love with him. If there is more proper friendship with them or more story, I could have accepted the couple.

But, this is a oneshot. So, I guess I just let it go.
 
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Wow this would be a whole different story if he gave up on her I guess
 

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