The Part-time Housekeeper!

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Thank yoi for your hard work! The guy looks like an ass but he is a tsun inside haha
 
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Would be better without the love triangle hanging over things, and furthermore the chemistry between the leads is only sort of there, and it doesn't really resolve any problems, it just kind of ends
with them saying "sure, let's date and be fuck-buddies, maybe it'll work out".

Honestly, in the end I'm convinced this is kind of awful. Decent moment-to-moment execution, but to what end? Feels like there's not much heart to it in the end, nor does it have anything to say. Who wants to read a romance like that?
 
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Thanks for translating but the friend would be a much better lover the way he cares for the MC. I need a spin off of the friend finding someone he deserves bc he deserves the best dammit!
 
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Oh well the story was good, there was a potential but that was quick and something was missing. Nevertheless art was cute ^^
 

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