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SamPenDrag0N Joined Dec 23, 2018 Messages 15 Aug 17, 2019 #2 Feels like machine translated. Can please correct the sentences. Thanks for the effort.
Trinitrobenzene Joined Jun 3, 2018 Messages 35 Aug 17, 2019 #3 Thanks for the chapter, story seems like it could be good. Though if you could spare a bit more time to proofread it or something it would be highly appreciated, the broken English is a tad distracting at the moment.
Thanks for the chapter, story seems like it could be good. Though if you could spare a bit more time to proofread it or something it would be highly appreciated, the broken English is a tad distracting at the moment.
acursio Member Joined Sep 29, 2018 Messages 191 Aug 17, 2019 #4 story feels like progressing quite fast, but the mtl kinda disturb me... ty anyway
Blackbird Fed-Kun's army Joined Jan 18, 2018 Messages 1,233 Aug 17, 2019 #6 Well usually wuxia plot. I like trash better then waste. Progress: OK Translation : OK Wuxia: OK
B botodopo Dex-chan lover Joined Nov 16, 2018 Messages 1,528 Oct 5, 2019 #7 i dont like these kinds of stories where the MC is completely pathetic until he gets a lucky powerup