First, thanks for the translation. better to have a translation than none translation ...
That said, while the gist of the story is there, there is work to be done in the idiomatic part of the translation. Also, there are parts where surely a negative particle was lost ( like when Skellebro sees Rena saying that apparently she didn't tortured the amulet guy enough ... he surely doesn't think Rena sadistic streak is a good thing
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That said, and back to the story ... hanged skeletons in chains. What a novel idea, never seen elsewhere, not even in any RTS game that is popular in South Korea [/sarcasm] ... Also, they made amulet guy mad. I'm not sure if we want to see him mad, even in his current shape .