Art’s gorgeous, but when you try to really really REALLY hammer the home the fact that we should sympathize for the girl... it gets dull. I flew through the first two-thirds of chapter four because it was nothing but “OH THE POOR GIRL! FEEL FOR HER! GET INVESTED!” That’s not a bad thing to do, but when you invest a whole chapter to it and LAY IT ON THICKKK, with nothing else about the FL or any supporting character, I tend to... skim through it like a thousand degree knife through lard. Chapter three was pretty well done but four fucking drove me into the shittin’ dirt...