The Twin Siblings’ New Life - Ch. 39

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No suspicious movement. Aside from sending a hand picked and un-vetted servant, that happens to be the suspicious person the 1st prince saw. Nani the fuck?
 
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The twins are inconsistent. The writer doesn't seem to know whether they should be 23 or 5. There is some naivety in 18-19 year Olds but @23 and this naive? Makes zero sense. We're they also sheltered in their previous life to be this oblivious to obvious cue. Granted they were abused, but wouldn't that make them suspicious of everybody? Why are they so trusting of Rioul shouldn't they be more worried about the fact that someone tried to kill them and everyone is a suspect.
 
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tbh ive had a very good time reading by just deciding that they were never reincarnated. I just assume that they are very intelligent, slightly naive five year olds and it all works out



Im still pissed off at how they threw their brother out of their room, who had gotten himself bedridden to protect them, and was explaining ALL OF THEIR PROBLEMS, for some count who acted courteous towards them exactly once. Their naivety, which exists only when the plot wants it to, pisses me off. Their actions arent moving the plot, the plot is determining how they act, which is a really shitty way of writing.
 

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