The Unwanted Undead Adventurer - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Lento Feyner

[MangaDex]

 

[depzdai]

The scholar looks hot.
Nice bones btw.

 

[Vodoka]

Fuck, a series with skeleton as a protagonist, and his first goal is to stop being a skeleton? Lame.

 

[thrrnvwls]

wow mcs a basic bitch for not wanting to be a skeleton

should just embrace it and become the alpha fuckboi eradicator

 

[Delete_me_]

If he didnt have that ambition I would have dropped it.

 

[Dibella]

You will become kaneki ken

 

[TokenOtaku]

This looks amazing! What a great first chapter!

 

[SSS26032002]

Umm.... you don't have any sort of brain tissues or cells... so going with the fact that you can't speak due to not having a vocal cord.... how are you able to think???? But this actually looks like something new... so.. I'll go with it...

 

[Le_Dook]

Some of the text is a bit small at times. Though most of those times are when there's large paragraphs, so it's understandably stuff. Great work nonetheless!

 

[firosahoge]

pretty cool so far

 

[bushwhacker2k]

Kudos to the artist, that 'dragon' is one of the more creative designs I've seen in a while.

Hopefully we can expect more of this Lorraine.

 

[StarGasm]

So... Caterpillar(ish) lower body, human upper body covered with feathers/fur, some kind of insect(?) head, light feather-like/demonic-like wings and a halo... If that's a Dragon I wonder just what kind of other abominations this author has to offer, in a good way

 

[Ghizghuth]

"Clinging to a hope I didn't want" What does that even mean? He clearly wants to go back to living as a human, and has hope to do so. How is that "hope he does not want"?

From what I can see for the moment, the first chapter is kind of stupid. So we get a little exposition, and we're explained that he had a shitty life. He was poor, bad at his job, uneducated and in a situation so unstable, that he immediately became reckless at the first glimmer of the slightest chance to make a bit of money, didn't even think and got killed. And now that his situation is "I turned into an undead", his first thoughts are attempting to go back to his previous lifestyle, which by the way will now be far harsher on him since it's really not suited for his new condition.

Also, why is that other skeleton immediately being aggressive? We already saw that they don't attack each other and are sometimes in groups, so I hope we'll get a reasonable explanation for that in the future, but for now, I suppose he isn't recognized as a fellow monster by the others.

It's sad because it has a really interesting premise, it could make for a great story yet we get the already overused plot of "I want to live back into society and will achieve it chapter 20"

PS: How in hell would anyone get fooled and mistake a ghoul for a human just because it's hidden under clothes... I mean, think for at least 2 damn seconds before creating a stupid plan...

 

[Dragoin]

Looks great and has a cool premise. Hopefully it doesn't turn into a harem.

 

[The5thSeraph]

It definitely wasn't a dragon. It had human arms and a weird wispy tail thing instead of a lower half. And a head-thing that reminded me more of Pyramid-Head from the Silent Hill games than anything else. Probably some sort of djinn or somesuch.
But I guess an idiotic bronze rank nobody being unable to tell the difference wouldn't exactly be unbelievable.

 

[primordia]

@The5thSeraph its fucking dragon stop acting like a drawing is some crazy thing

 

[xHighs]

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[Reishin]

He must've been drinking excessive amount of milk.

 

[sweatyman123]

damn thats a dragon i like it since its not the normal giant lizard with wings that looks cool rather than scary the dragon in this manga looks pretty good

 

[xeno77]

a dragon with human hands something new i guess