The Villainess Lives Again - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

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the magic circle is so smooth like you draw it with your hands when actually she drew it with her tongue(legs are not counted because it might mess up the magic circle)
 
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This story is kind of disappointed, they write these female characters that are so evil and cunning but , did 0% things to protect themselves. A person doesn’t kill a bunch of people and start wars and not develop any skeptics towards others, distrust or malicious feelings within themselves.[ She dispanned her intelligence group/she let a bunch of people with dirt and her on the empire go/she didn't ask for anything from her clearly deviant brother , who she is fully aware is a a monster. Like, once she became and adult i don't think you can realistically write a character that commits war crimes but still be to innocent and hopefully to think "wow my evil bro won't hurt me !"?

If a writer is going to make a FL evil ,do it !, its so weird to try and have some do all these horrible things and still make her pathetic as possible [before she got tortured]. Its like the writer wants the MC to be a badass but also the docile and feminine girl which just doesn’t work after you crossed the line so many times….just let her be evil . T[period]
 
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Come on. Why spoil that victory? His highness just get rid of the most dangerous enemy, so why spoil that?
 
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Sooo how many blood did she have? im pretty sure biting ur own tounge cant make enough blood to make a circle that's like big af
 
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Nahhh, I would like a villain that would continue doing evil acts.
 
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Thank you for your translations and work! There are some people in the comment who seem to not have read properly or thought about what has happened so far at a deeper level but this story is very good.
 
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So did the MC lose her legs? It said's that her hands were cut off, but it looks more like her arms were. The legs also look to be stumps. I've always thought this was a great story element. Such as a princess being kidnapped and her limbs and tongue removed, suffering, then one day some bandit girl finds her and rescues her. As they go throughout the land and the princess slowly regaining her happiness. Such as the princess once being someone that could use her voice and dance ability to enchant and buff/curse people. The bandit being some girl that has the rare ability to speak through telepathy. So it becomes a symbiosis relationship. The former disgraced princess will help the bandit girl in battles and use her smarts in negotiating. While the bandit not only saved her, but also protects, feeds, and bathes the princess. It could also be interesting. If depending on the bandit girls size, that she carries the princess around like that of a small kid. They pretend to be a mother-daughter relationship as an identity.

Maybe in the end, have the princess gain her limbs again. I can see a story such as this ending not completely happy. Where the princess might regain her limbs, but still can no longer talk. I just think this idea has something that can happen. Either a smart and powerful lonely princess gets her life ruined even more, or a happy stereotype Disney princess life gets ruined. But is saved due to some ragid girl caring and bonding with her.
 
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Poor Cedric who was left here, but our mc can't do anything in this timeline. I hope if another universe gets better, this horrible present would turns out better,too. (Like sending some curse to her brother through dimension via magic circle)

Because even if she turns back time, I don't think it's the same universe.
 

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