This Irreplaceable Hell - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - The Fourth Heroine

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Its actually my own fault for missing the yuri tag in the first place.
I was complaining that they only set up subversions for one genre and not both of them when the whole point was it to be a yuri comic from the very begining.

What I initially meant with more indepth ending is that they had a number of plot threads to do something cool with but isnt followed up upon like

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What happens if you lose the protragonist to someone else?

The audience feedback happens to impact manga in serialization pretty heavily, what would they think about this "author" going against the grain?

Shoot, would the editor even approve? What if our girl were to get into an "accident" because she couldn't follow the script?

Would Fourth-chan ever be sent home? Would other things from her comic start leaking into the other one too?

What if Fourth-chan continued to rebel, instead of giving in?

The concept of becoming an extra feels like a sinister force is watching over them. What if decided to take a direct approach to correcting the abberation?[/ul]

All of these ideas could have been led into based on what we were given and wouldn't have felt like they were out of left field like that damn locker IMO.

Like there was exactly one scene that set up Megu wanting to do it to keep her around and it just wasnt enough for me. Now that I know it was supposed to be yuri it still feels tacked on, but I think thats the point you are trying to make.
 
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Watching dudes bitching about in this comments section was just as fun, ahaha
Well, still nothing compared to usual cringefest happening on DS forums. Though i find their manic overemotive reaction really funny, given that haremu and GL audiences often display the same shitty traits, and have similar shitty expectations as readers, at least on teh interwebz.
 
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oh wow i really like this concept, but i'm really here for that war girl's design and i'm curious about the manga she was supposed to be in lmao.
 
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too bad there wasn't a proper ending to this story, interesting at least ^^
 
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I really would have liked to see this continue further. Does the genre of the manga change? Does a different character become the protagonist? Do Misaki and Megumi suddenly have to "move away"? Does the manga get cancelled? Or does it, perhaps, become more popular? Alas, it ended just as things were really getting interesting.
 
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hey guys here is an interview from the author himself or herself: https://nlab.itmedia.co.jp/nl/articles/1805/20/news005.html
 
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I fell like I'm one of the few people who dislike this manga. The meta commentary is weak, the critiques towards harem works, doesn't really work, since in the majority of the series, the problems showed by the character are addressed, and the fact that the mc is not aware of the fiction makes things even weaker, also the addition of fanservice at end, makes the commentary about fanservice strange and contradictory
 

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