This World Is Mine

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Please upload immediately, i've read some chapter but still the translations taking time so long
 
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Art is definitely on a weaker side, faces can get wonky from time to time, but overall, if you care about the story more than art, it's pretty decent. Overall it's definitely 8/10 for me. With better art could be easy 9.
 
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Aside from the fact that it's no longer possible to read it here and I had to read it on Mangafire...

6/10 God, how poorly written this story is... I mean, the idea is great, very unique and creative, some of the relationships are interesting in the initial concept...

But it's all so poorly done, I don't know if it's based on a light novel and it's better there, but here all the relationships are kind of strange, they don't develop well, the relationship between the guard and the other girl It seems to have come out of nowhere. The powers are not well developed at all, the limits of their power are never stated, and out of nowhere, the information about the binding magic is thrown at you, lasting only a few minutes... But her regenerative power seems to have become permanent.

The childhood friend girl could have been better written, but honestly, I think she was at least the best-written part of the story. Although it's still very random that she died randomly in a random year and ended up in history... The protagonist's excuse is understandable, but this one isn't.

Honestly, I hated the protagonist in the first half. A million questions were asked and she didn't answer any of them, she always seemed lost and didn't seem very intelligent, He also repeated some lines and asked obvious questions. She seemed timid and never answered anything, but out of nowhere she wasn't afraid of anything when she was about to speak and felt confident even in her precarious situation.

Her power and knowledge should have been explored and used more thoroughly in the story. I also found it bizarre how quickly the princess changed her mind and suddenly started liking her out of nowhere.

I also didn't like the ending very much; the story seemed so small and irrelevant with the only villain being the other princess and nothing more. Considering that the author is technically to blame for all of this, I was also expecting a happier ending for everyone; the ending was kind of lackluster.

Oh, the author practically didn't give any fanservice... Like, no kisses, no romantic scenes, not a satisfying ending... It's a romance, but it lacked passion..
 
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