Tora, Tokidoki Banii - Oneshot

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Uuuh o get this is just a teaser for a possible serialization... But you can at least finish it on a more interesting spot.
 
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I'm not usually a "wah wah we need more" kinda person, but this one genuinely does feel quite unfinished. Like wtf was the point of the story if it ends right there lol, could've told the same thing in like four pages instead of 20
 
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Did it not finish processing? "A Gyaru and The Chairman at the Bathhouse" is already a half-finished product, but this is even more so. They not only cut mid-plotline, they cut mid-scene. I enjoy the gap premise in both, but the author really needs to work on actually delivering a story in his works.
A lot of oneshots serve as the seeds for serialized stories. I think ending the oneshot before the denouement motivates more readers to vote for it in the popularity polls (which increases the chance of serialization). From that standpoint it's really cunning smart.
 
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IMO these story lines where the guy will (most likely) have to pay to keep seeing the girl and probably get jealous of another guy at her job will always be a little weird to me.
 
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The same artist of A Gyaru and The Chairman at the Bathhouse
so you may support the serialization from the author via this link.

The first question is choosing the series you are responding to.
This series is the second option: 銭湯ギャルと委員長



The second question is about your gender:
Male
Female
Other
Prefer not to answer



Third question is about your age, e.g. 20s, 30s...



Fourth question is:
I liked it
I didn't like it.



Then what did you like about the work:
Story
Characters
World/Setting
Artwork
Sense of Humor
I didn't like anything
Other _____________________



Then basically the same thing but for what you didn't like (bottom two are kind of switched):
Story
Characters
World/Setting
Artwork
Sense of Humor
Other _____________________
There wasn't anything I didn't like



Then there are a couple of open-ended questions.



What scenes left an impression on you?
_____________________



Please share any other comments
_____________________


You don't need to answer any of the open-ended questions.
Oh the author himself actually make a survey? That's cool.
 
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So...a fierce tiger at day, a cute bunny at night??

Okay, I'm in.
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No.....JUST GIVE ME MOARRRR!!! I NEED IT!!!
 
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theres no way this is a one shot, or if it is then it wouldnt end here. are we sure the rest of it isnt just paywalled content on thr author's pixiv/fanbox?? ive seen similar happenings for both manga and manhwa (korean authors use postype).

edit: checked out the one shot entry on the raw site and it truly does end there. it seems like it needs to get serialised for thr author to continue it, wow. what a cliffhanger ending 🥲
 
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The same artist of A Gyaru and The Chairman at the Bathhouse
so you may support the serialization from the author via this link.

The first question is choosing the series you are responding to.
This series is the second option: 銭湯ギャルと委員長



The second question is about your gender:
Male
Female
Other
Prefer not to answer



Third question is about your age, e.g. 20s, 30s...



Fourth question is:
I liked it
I didn't like it.



Then what did you like about the work:
Story
Characters
World/Setting
Artwork
Sense of Humor
I didn't like anything
Other _____________________



Then basically the same thing but for what you didn't like (bottom two are kind of switched):
Story
Characters
World/Setting
Artwork
Sense of Humor
Other _____________________
There wasn't anything I didn't like



Then there are a couple of open-ended questions.



What scenes left an impression on you?
_____________________



Please share any other comments
_____________________


You don't need to answer any of the open-ended questions.
Beware, the second option is for A Gyaru and The Chairman at the Bathhouse. There is no option for this one-shot, except lthe last one (copy-paste "ヤンキー少女と友達になる話"). Google TL of the options:
  1. Hayama, shut up?
  2. Bathhouse Gal and the Class President
  3. Yamada-kun can't beat Hanamura
  4. The silent Ameguro-kun's mask situation
  5. I want to be provoked by the Demon King
  6. The single young lady who was called a miserable woman is cursed and saves the duke.
  7. Asaka-kun is a funny guy☆
  8. The daughter of a wealthy family with zero friends
  9. Don't say welcome back
  10. Ukise Shoten 15 ~We will make your wishes come true~
  11. The Beast and the Dark Witch
  12. Animal-eared boys are my friends
  13. Makino-san won't reincarnate at all
  14. The creepy and mysterious shy guy
  15. The limit cafe girl likes black suits
  16. He's such an understanding guy
  17. I'm interested in Samejima-kun.
  18. I heard the voice of my heart from my favorite idol
  19. A swordsman with the unique skill [9999 Gacha] challenges the Demon King with an attack power of 9999, but a re-draw occurs during the battle.
  20. As an adult, I won't lay a hand on Koharu-kun.
  21. Pest Extermination Squad
  22. Other:___________________
 

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