Tou no Kanri o Shite Miyou
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I guess there are one too many problems with this manga and eventhough it feels like it becomes more interesting further down, I feel like the author has made a big mistake with the MC's character.
I don't like it when the MC is just a plot device for a single aspect of the story and everything else is governed by people around him. I don't know, if I'm the only one that feels that way about this protagonist, but I just feel like he acts as a shackle sometimes. The FMCs are made to love him, because he just 'emits' some kind of likeable energy, but that makes him incredibly boring as a character.
In one of the later chapters, it was revealed that people look down upon him and one of the first two FMCs 'goes on a rampage', but she doesn't really do anything special. It feels so anticlimactic, because I really wanted a brutal punishment at that point. Everything just feels incredibly vanilla and although I enjoy laid back stuff, I don't want it to be all over the story. I want certain parts to be brutal and more complicated than what is presented here.
The only complicated thing in this whole manga is, deciding which parts of all that text is actually important for the story. I feel like too much ot the information and dialogue is useless. I mean how can you even write so much useless stuff when characters are talking amongst each other.
I don't like it when the MC is just a plot device for a single aspect of the story and everything else is governed by people around him. I don't know, if I'm the only one that feels that way about this protagonist, but I just feel like he acts as a shackle sometimes. The FMCs are made to love him, because he just 'emits' some kind of likeable energy, but that makes him incredibly boring as a character.
In one of the later chapters, it was revealed that people look down upon him and one of the first two FMCs 'goes on a rampage', but she doesn't really do anything special. It feels so anticlimactic, because I really wanted a brutal punishment at that point. Everything just feels incredibly vanilla and although I enjoy laid back stuff, I don't want it to be all over the story. I want certain parts to be brutal and more complicated than what is presented here.
The only complicated thing in this whole manga is, deciding which parts of all that text is actually important for the story. I feel like too much ot the information and dialogue is useless. I mean how can you even write so much useless stuff when characters are talking amongst each other.
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The writing is way too complex(they're trying too hard) and panels have wayyyy too much text, for a manga that would never be taken seriously because of all the fan service and full blown sex scenes. They have to decide in which direction they go with the manga, because this just doesn't work, I'm going through it and I couldn't care less about the wall of texts describing every little thing about the dungeons and the whole world building when there's so much cringe fan service.
Basically, this could be much better if there wasn't so much fan service. But it also could be much better if they just committed to fan service and had less walls of texts and kept it simple, cause those scenes are done really well too.
The writing is way too complex(they're trying too hard) and panels have wayyyy too much text, for a manga that would never be taken seriously because of all the fan service and full blown sex scenes. They have to decide in which direction they go with the manga, because this just doesn't work, I'm going through it and I couldn't care less about the wall of texts describing every little thing about the dungeons and the whole world building when there's so much cringe fan service.
Basically, this could be much better if there wasn't so much fan service. But it also could be much better if they just committed to fan service and had less walls of texts and kept it simple, cause those scenes are done really well too.
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