Tou no Kanri o Shite Miyou
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I guess there are one too many problems with this manga and eventhough it feels like it becomes more interesting further down, I feel like the author has made a big mistake with the MC's character.
I don't like it when the MC is just a plot device for a single aspect of the story and everything else is governed by people around him. I don't know, if I'm the only one that feels that way about this protagonist, but I just feel like he acts as a shackle sometimes. The FMCs are made to love him, because he just 'emits' some kind of likeable energy, but that makes him incredibly boring as a character.
In one of the later chapters, it was revealed that people look down upon him and one of the first two FMCs 'goes on a rampage', but she doesn't really do anything special. It feels so anticlimactic, because I really wanted a brutal punishment at that point. Everything just feels incredibly vanilla and although I enjoy laid back stuff, I don't want it to be all over the story. I want certain parts to be brutal and more complicated than what is presented here.
The only complicated thing in this whole manga is, deciding which parts of all that text is actually important for the story. I feel like too much ot the information and dialogue is useless. I mean how can you even write so much useless stuff when characters are talking amongst each other.
I don't like it when the MC is just a plot device for a single aspect of the story and everything else is governed by people around him. I don't know, if I'm the only one that feels that way about this protagonist, but I just feel like he acts as a shackle sometimes. The FMCs are made to love him, because he just 'emits' some kind of likeable energy, but that makes him incredibly boring as a character.
In one of the later chapters, it was revealed that people look down upon him and one of the first two FMCs 'goes on a rampage', but she doesn't really do anything special. It feels so anticlimactic, because I really wanted a brutal punishment at that point. Everything just feels incredibly vanilla and although I enjoy laid back stuff, I don't want it to be all over the story. I want certain parts to be brutal and more complicated than what is presented here.
The only complicated thing in this whole manga is, deciding which parts of all that text is actually important for the story. I feel like too much ot the information and dialogue is useless. I mean how can you even write so much useless stuff when characters are talking amongst each other.
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The writing is way too complex(they're trying too hard) and panels have wayyyy too much text, for a manga that would never be taken seriously because of all the fan service and full blown sex scenes. They have to decide in which direction they go with the manga, because this just doesn't work, I'm going through it and I couldn't care less about the wall of texts describing every little thing about the dungeons and the whole world building when there's so much cringe fan service.
Basically, this could be much better if there wasn't so much fan service. But it also could be much better if they just committed to fan service and had less walls of texts and kept it simple, cause those scenes are done really well too.
The writing is way too complex(they're trying too hard) and panels have wayyyy too much text, for a manga that would never be taken seriously because of all the fan service and full blown sex scenes. They have to decide in which direction they go with the manga, because this just doesn't work, I'm going through it and I couldn't care less about the wall of texts describing every little thing about the dungeons and the whole world building when there's so much cringe fan service.
Basically, this could be much better if there wasn't so much fan service. But it also could be much better if they just committed to fan service and had less walls of texts and kept it simple, cause those scenes are done really well too.
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I don’t even read it anymore. I flip through until something looks interesting.
The information dumps, like you say, are useless. I don’t even consider me “reading” this anymore. The smut isn’t interesting. The story is going nowhere. The conflicts don’t matter. The harem is happy. MC has vague, god power. There’s no way to explain to a new person what’s going on or why they should care.
And I fucking hate that living room. All they do is run their mouths about bullshit as they sit on couches. It’s the most boring part of Pokémon, made into a manga.
newbies, don’t read this.
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Lovely mc,cant wait for another chap ^^
I was pleasantly surprised how much better is this one compared to isekai power fantasy trash we usually get.
Author managed to hit all requirements for tagging this as isekai power fantasy without hitting usual issues.
And bonus points for it being a harem with proper harem stuff (99% of harem stuff is either mc loving one member with others being 5th wheels or if he hasn't chosen one they all bicker constantly, so sick if those fake harems).
Well deserved 10/10.
Can't wait for more.
Now to see if there is english localization available.
Author managed to hit all requirements for tagging this as isekai power fantasy without hitting usual issues.
And bonus points for it being a harem with proper harem stuff (99% of harem stuff is either mc loving one member with others being 5th wheels or if he hasn't chosen one they all bicker constantly, so sick if those fake harems).
Well deserved 10/10.
Can't wait for more.
Now to see if there is english localization available.
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I'm kind of in a "Well, I got this far, might as well..." type of situation, where I just kept on reading, but then Soseki scans just disappears all of a sudden and sadly, so does the quality of the translations. Add to that, having to read some missing chapters on a different site and then the rest of the translations past chapter 50 mostly being done by an accurately named group: Incompetent scans.
Yeah, sorry, I know it's not easy doing translations, it's time consuming and all of that, but there is a LOT of talk in this manga and many details are explained and WERE comprehinsible when Soseki did the translations, but sadly, no more.
So aside from the story being mediocre at best, the decreased translation quality is pushing me in the direction of dropping this story. I'll try to read a few more chapters tomorrow, or in the coming days and HOPE that the competensy levels somewhat increase, despite the group's name, but... I don't know. It usually isn't a matter of just a a few chapters that are bad.
Thanks for the effort and all of that, but I do wish Soseki was still around.
Yeah, sorry, I know it's not easy doing translations, it's time consuming and all of that, but there is a LOT of talk in this manga and many details are explained and WERE comprehinsible when Soseki did the translations, but sadly, no more.
So aside from the story being mediocre at best, the decreased translation quality is pushing me in the direction of dropping this story. I'll try to read a few more chapters tomorrow, or in the coming days and HOPE that the competensy levels somewhat increase, despite the group's name, but... I don't know. It usually isn't a matter of just a a few chapters that are bad.
Thanks for the effort and all of that, but I do wish Soseki was still around.
