Toubousha Elio - Vol. 3 Ch. 19 - My Story

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How do you accidentally say that? lol well I hope we get some insight next chapter

oh and thanks for the translation @COF
 
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I don't know why, but Debora's dot eyes at the bottom of page 14 make me laugh.
 
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Now that the Maestra is dead, Debora now faces a new mortal enemy: bright and frilly clothing.

Nice to see how chill and introspective Pedro's become from the short-sighted zealot he was back then.

Finally, we get Elio's backstory.
 
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@COF i think there is slight error in page 17 first panel the mother line, isnt it "your mind" not "my mind".

that debora dot eyes and just let elio carry her lol.
 
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@COF: The only one I fopund was on pg. 17, when Señora Maria tells Pedro "if you have any other woman on my mind..." should be "...on your mind...". Beyond that, great work as always.

Also, a recommendation that you may already know: here in Spain we know Blanche of Bourbon as Blanca de Borbón. Both mean the same (french vs. spanish), but as the setting is Medieval Spain maybe you could use Blanca instead. The choice is yours.
 
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Bardo, you precious penitent Templar, your penance will be whatever deborah has in store for your hand in stuffing her into that dress.
 

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