"Touto sugite Yomenaaaaaaai!!" 4P Short Stories - Vol. 2 Ch. 43 - Inside the Kotatsu [by Bokkuri Matsumoto]

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(Page1) Kotatsu (炬燵) is a low, wooden table frame covered by a futon, or heavy blanket, upon which a table top sits. Underneath is a heat source, formerly a charcoal brazier but now electric, often built into the table itself.
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Noren (暖簾) are traditional Japanese fabric dividers hung between rooms, on walls, in doorways, or in windows. They usually have one or more vertical slits cut from the bottom to nearly the top of the fabric, allowing for easier passage or viewing.
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In this manga is was more of a beaded curtain like this:
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ENjoy Vol 2 Ch 17 - Inside the kotatsu - Matsumoto Bokkuri
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You sure he's 12 yr old? Cuz ge doesn't look like it, also mentioned smthn about graduating college
 
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this one is meh
Poor drawing, can't even figure out, what's happening under kotatsu
 
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@Operation_Recon @mAceOfHearts @kenrms
No he is 12 years old in that panel which is a flashback
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@VINT64 They are kicking/stamping each other leg. The author is new he doesn't have any other significant works done.There were many things that were weird phrasing of dialogue not just the art that was weird lel
 
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Yeah, that too. I hope he grows into a good author one day
 
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@Operation_Recon

A darkening of the color outside of the panels is one way that flashbacks or dreams or imaginings are sometimes indicated in manga. Another is rounded corners when otherwise sharp corners have been used.

These cues are easily missed. But the use of darkening allows something of a fade-in or fade-out effect.
 
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It was good but that was some of the laziest drawing ever.. it has like 3 different styles in just 4 pages.. but I appreciate the effort.. all I can draw are stick figures... 🧐
 
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I almost never nitpick on a author’s art but this one was literally impossible to follow or figure out on the first read.
 
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Oh, I see, my bad then. The constant artstyle changes and overall art quality made it all but impossible for me to discern that those were meant to be younger versions of the characters.
 

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