TS Mahou Shoujo ♥ Mazoka - Ch. 5

[luigiymario2]

Lmao, confusing him for a succubus, F!

 

[Monstrengo]

I can see why she'd be confused for a succubus.

 

[fineifyoucantdoitiwill]

Ohhh hell ya! Let's fucking go! Thanks for the translation!
Been looking forward to this one.
Love that we're getting a new magical girl for Mazoka to make friends with.

I do have an issue with the typesetting on this panel. Please try to avoid covering her beautiful body with text as much as possible, especially her breasts and other assets.

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I'll do my best! 🫡

 

[DirtEater21]

Thank you for the translation

 

[ipmanvsthemask]

Spoiler

if you check the author pixiv/twitter, you can see futana is yuuna (mc classmate)

It's pretty obvious just from this chapter.

 

[hippomann]

Counter argument:
Ok sure, I am a succubus, why does that matter? I may be feeding off of men's sexual energy, but I am using that energy to protect this city and it's inhabitants. Even the men who's energy I drain have a net good as they are simply exhausted and horny rather than dead via aliens or kaiju. I've never meant this place or it's inhabitance any harm, I am not only just trying to survive but actively seeking out dangerous threats to the peace and taking them out. I am a hero and you have no ground to judge me. So buzz off.

 

[Cornonthekopp]

her rival has a really cool outfit

 

[PredatorDuck]

I'll do my best! 🫡

Is there a reason why you change fonts so often, often times even mid-sentence?
I went over the raws to see what was up, but that one is pretty much one single font with a few exceptions. Might I suggest you stick to one main font, since the way it is right now is pretty distracting.

Same thing goes for the constant changing font size.

Example of page 1:

 

[Luvky_Person]

FUUUUTAAAAA HEREIT COMES!!!!!!

 

[Jatopian]

Girl what? She has to be a succubus because men fall for her? Just because you can't charm them even looking much more like a succubus than she does? Envy is such an ugly thing.

 

[Athuro10]

Damn I mean hey she's not wrong tho

 

[ItzUhMe]

Would've been funny if Yuuna was actually the deadpool looking guy

 

[FHMeta]

Counter argument:
Ok sure, I am a succubus, why does that matter? I may be feeding off of men's sexual energy, but I am using that energy to protect this city and it's inhabitants. Even the men who's energy I drain have a net good as they are simply exhausted and horny rather than dead via aliens or kaiju. I've never meant this place or it's inhabitance any harm, I am not only just trying to survive but actively seeking out dangerous threats to the peace and taking them out. I am a hero and you have no ground to judge me. So buzz off.

Not that I think it'll do this, but it's entirely possible that succubi do permanent harm in their feeding. In which case, a succubus defender would still be doing harm, just more hidden and slower. Of course, like I said, I don't think it'll go that way.

 

[Lunkli]

What?! A real chapter with proper writing that's not 100% fanservice???

 

[Xelarion]

Magical Incubus Madoka-kun?

 

[ansonh92]

...
Magical girl but succubus
Now, that sounds like a good six-digit story.

 

[fineifyoucantdoitiwill]

Is there a reason why you change fonts so often, often times even mid-sentence?
I went over the raws to see what was up, but that one is pretty much one single font with a few exceptions. Might I suggest you stick to one main font, since the way it is right now is pretty distracting.

Same thing goes for the constant changing font size.

Example of page 1:
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- Honestly? Just tryna be unique, but I guess there's no need to have the fonts all over the place if it makes it hard to read. Just thought it'd bring out more emotions if I do it that way.

But what do you guys think? Should I just stick with something simple or should I continue with this style?

 

[Bdert999]

Let’s gooooooooooooo!

 

[Bdert999]

We’ve gone from watching the mc get bullied to the mc bullying people.

 

[Bdert999]

Mc love interest?