TS Mahou Shoujo ♥ Mazoka - Ch. 5

[Flame-2-Haze]

The power is similar to that of succubus's, so it's not that far-fetched.

 

[fineifyoucantdoitiwill]

- Honestly? Just tryna be unique, but I guess there's no need to have the fonts all over the place if it makes it hard to read. Just thought it'd bring out more emotions if I do it that way.

But what do you guys think? Should I just stick with something simple or should I continue with this style?

There's a lengthy explaination on how I handle the fonts since I try to make the fonts express what is being said which makes it stick far from the rest but maybe I'll tone it down if it's too much makes it look bad instead.

 

[poii1990]

make it gay please, make this manga gay

 

[EchoGirl]

of course she's also a magical girl. tho yeah i guess you could consider that succubus-like even if the knocked out guy's alright XD

I mean bro is genderswap when doing Mahou Shoujo works, so it is not gay right?

only if the balls touch 8D;

 

[TheGrandMugwump]

Charm is auto activated now, huh? Is this going to be a "power corrupts" kind of situation? The stronger she gets and the more she uses her power, the more girly she'll become? Hot.

 

[Hikineet]

Thanks for the chapter.

 

[PrincessKadath]

- Honestly? Just tryna be unique, but I guess there's no need to have the fonts all over the place if it makes it hard to read. Just thought it'd bring out more emotions if I do it that way.

But what do you guys think? Should I just stick with something simple or should I continue with this style?

I don't really mind unless the font is bad, but I would guess that'd be subjective too. 🤷‍♀️

 

[MTFish90]

 

[finders]

FUTAna
The only missing letters were -ri

 

[Zet1502]

There's a lengthy explaination on how I handle the fonts since I try to make the fonts express what is being said which makes it stick far from the rest but maybe I'll tone it down if it's too much makes it look bad instead.

I think the idea is great, but you should tone it down a little

Like for example, there is a difference in highlighting only the important parts, compared to highligthing every other sentence/word

But I've never done typesetting or anything like it, so you do you


EDIT: thx for the chapter

 

[Lostrealm]

Futana(ri) is cute

 

[BanzaiYuri]

Sorry broski, wrong term, she's an incubus that takes whatever form to harvest energy from men!

 

[incline]

Mazoka has a blue heart gem, Futana has a red spade gem, that means there’s at least 2 more magical girl gems out there.

 

[incline]

Charm is auto activated now, huh? Is this going to be a "power corrupts" kind of situation? The stronger she gets and the more she uses her power, the more girly she'll become? Hot.

I hope she doesn’t lose total control of her body and it does things without her consent. Ick.

 

[PredatorDuck]

- Honestly? Just tryna be unique, but I guess there's no need to have the fonts all over the place if it makes it hard to read. Just thought it'd bring out more emotions if I do it that way.

But what do you guys think? Should I just stick with something simple or should I continue with this style?

There's a lengthy explaination on how I handle the fonts since I try to make the fonts express what is being said which makes it stick far from the rest but maybe I'll tone it down if it's too much makes it look bad instead.

If I'm being honest (and I mean this with no ill intention), we're not psychic and there's no possible way for us to deduce what emotion or feeling you are trying to convey with a seemingly random selection of fonts. Additionally I think that since you try to emphasize everything differently, nothing actually gets emphasized because there is no default, so the effort you put into making it stand out is lost on us.

When typesetting, I personally try to match the font the Japanese uses, but I try to focus more on how the font looks, for example, if the narration boxes have thinner and neater fonts or there's a bolder, thicker font for when a character is yelling, etc. I try to find a font that resembles that.

 

[Shiden]

"You're calling me a succubus? At least I have a relatively normal outfit, miss high-cut-leotard-and-thigh-socks."

 

[fineifyoucantdoitiwill]

If I'm being honest (and I mean this with no ill intention), we're not psychic and there's no possible way for us to deduce what emotion or feeling you are trying to convey with a seemingly random selection of fonts. Additionally I think that since you try to emphasize everything differently, nothing actually gets emphasized because there is no default, so the effort you put into making it stand out is lost on us.

When typesetting, I personally try to match the font the Japanese uses, but I try to focus more on how the font looks, for example, if the narration boxes have thinner and neater fonts or there's a bolder, thicker font for when a character is yelling, etc. I try to find a font that resembles that.

You're right, I guess I went a bit overboard since It felt like I was doing something new .

I guess simple is still the best way to go!

I'll try to tone it down and focus more on how it actually looks from the source. 🫡

 

[TheGrandMugwump]

I hope she doesn’t lose total control of her body and it does things without her consent. Ick.

Brainwashing 101 is to force someone to do something until they do it without fighting back or eventually not thinking about it anymore.

 

[AvidMangaReader81]

Gave up the previous end card aesthetic, eh?? Not that I mind, but a shame, lol.

Finally got this done! It only took...quite a while.

Well, back to waiting I guess!

Yep, guess so. Last Saturday though, huh?? Guess I’m early for once—well, that and the fact that I just binged the whole thing—but that’s besides the point, lmao.

Aah, gal, please looks at your outfit first.

^{Hé, hé!}

Thank you for the update!

Self-Awareness 0 😔.
Then again, if you assume they can’t change their outfit, I guess it makes sense in that case, but still, lol. If it is to be believed that that’s his classmate…then I mean, she should’ve helped out in defending Mazoka’s good name earlier in regards to the slander said by the other classmates, lol.

Maybe they can add clothing, but it just disappears once they revert their transformation or something and the costs add up?? Or maybe something else, I dunno. A hassle, maybe, since they have to change into it all the time or bring it with them?

Spoiler

if you check the author pixiv/twitter, you can see futana is yuuna (mc classmate)

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No way… Even though she claimed to be a huge fan?! Crazy… Not sarcasm btw, phrased it in a way that kinda sounds like it but it isn’t, lol.

Saw it on a Russian peep vid that a footlong suddenly popped out of a slit after moving. It was a man with balls and schlong....

H-Huh…?? The fuck? Lmfao.

Ngl i love the dramatic irony of Mazoka's true identity being some guy named Kamazo, it makes scenes way more funnier

Real—it does, frfr. Makes the hilarity factor much more accentuated, lol.

The classmate's the magical girl, no way she could be a red herring. She might be into MC and/or tsundere towards Mazoka, being this upset over the charm thing. Pretty hypocritical of her since she's way more undressed.
They'll either learn each other's secret identities right away, or keep having these encounters for a while.

Huge fan into her idol?? Checks out. For all we know though, they could’ve been a magical girl for longer. Maybe not though, since he didn’t even believe in the concept beforehand. Then again, with that outfit, who WOULD willingly fight in broad daylight? Assuming she has common sense since she’s originally a girl anyways. Gotta keep them defenses high, y’know.

Hilarious comments, and can’t wait for the next one!! For real this time, since I can’t binge anymore, lol.

 

[Kiriha]

When will the mazo girl get some futa d?