Tsuihou Suru Gawa no Monogatari - Vol. 4 Ch. 29 - Conclusion

[Valkyria-Edge]

... and the manga is axed because of over-generalization. It made the author look like an 8th-grader fan fiction ghostwriter.

I mean mostly because the novel got axed before hand tho it got massively dumped on in Japan they even started clowning this manga when it showed up

 

[TestAddress]

4 chaps left to resolve everything eh?

A single slash that cuts through everything! Including the story, and the possibility of a sequel.

All slashed.
GG.

 

[TestAddress]

What a fucking tease. Calling it conclusion but not having it be the last chapter.

If it has been, it would be known as the literal and the literary axe.

 

[TestAddress]

I mean mostly because the novel got axed before hand tho it got massively dumped on in Japan they even started clowning this manga when it showed up

What is Japan using, Line? Maybe they shat on this series on the novel website itself, I guess.

 

[Ender__Wa]

From most the other chapters, I feel there's an excuse, but this is just not believable. It changed from a tragic adventurer party's story to a shonen, just like that. Imo, if the arc was given more time to develop before concluding things, it would have faired much better at least. (I know this isn't the end of the novel, poor choice of words, mostly on the title of the chapter's part.)

Edit; I use tragic loosely, this seems like a first timer's go at this. Never publish your first tries unless they're speedruns.

 

[Rex_Nichts]

Ayoooooo. From the last time I saw this pile of shit, it was at 3.81 or something. Which put it 0.02 points below the 10th lowest rated manga. But now it's the 8th lowest rated manga at 3.78. The next leg is at 3.68, which would be a tall order. This dumpsterfire IS ending at chapter 33, so we only have 4 more chapters before this steaming pile of shit stain cements its legacy as one of the worst manga out there. I don't think it's possible to push this blasphemy any further than 5th place at the most pessimistic estimate, considering that every step down is larger than the last. And I don't think it'd be possible to garner any more animosity during those last 4 chapters to break this manga's kneecaps any further. But I'll be happy to be proven wrong. In fact, I'd be delighted to know if this afront to god somehow manages to dig any deeper than this.

 

[wallsg]

Remember when this manga was sold as a story about the banishing party?
Pepperidge Farm remembers.

I just used that line last Wednesday at a pizza lunch and nobody at all knew what it meant. It was all old guys too. Also only one of them remembered the Bartles & Jaymes ads.

 

[YamiryuuZero]

He could have protected Est all along.

 

[SpecialProjectY]

This information should be in the first chapters, Athena was looking for her childhood crush all the time, a grown up dude who saved her, became an adventurer and looked all over the world to make babies together legally now.
All while Est being dragged into this "love seeking adventure" as only a friendly support.

Also, the reason why Daru even joined the party because he found a loli he rescued once, now that she is legal and somehow looks a like his party member he didn't make a move on due her untimely death, can finally make his dreams come true.

Yet, here we are.

 

[TestAddress]

He could have protected Est all along.

Daru desired Athena all along.