I would change description to something like: the story centers around x and their friends blah blah about the blah blah that involves their group blah blah. Make it obvious that author suffers from forgetmcaitus and romamtiatus and starts wondering off with drama on their friends nobody really started to read for in the first place
Pretty good ending, cute couple with cute development. It would have been better if the sister and friend had more development, but that's my only complain.
Ahh, it's finally over. Could've gone on longer but since it was a pretty down to earth series. The ending is honestly fine too. Will definitely miss it though.