Tsurugi no Joou to Rakuin no Ko - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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... this was a confusing read. The characters change in emotions were so fast paced that I didn’t know what was happening. Basically I know what is happening but I don’t understand it.
 
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I have nothing against ye olde English.

But throw in a mix of bad grammar and awkward forced rhyming with bad metre and it really kills it XD

Using "your" instead of "you're" in tongues of yore, has me crying on the floor.
 

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