Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Apr 1, 2019
- Messages
- 447
@j8nchavez for Page 9, did it mean to say "we did it the second time she came to my house", not "we did it for the second time when she came to my house?
mc says that "not even even womanizers would hug a girl he meets for the first time", which doesn't match the previous statement
Same for Page 10 where fmc says "It's too early to do it for the second time", where I think it should be "it's too early to do it on the second meeting"
mc says that "not even even womanizers would hug a girl he meets for the first time", which doesn't match the previous statement
Same for Page 10 where fmc says "It's too early to do it for the second time", where I think it should be "it's too early to do it on the second meeting"