Thats the problem when the MC and FMC start dating early in the story, there is not much story to told after that and we just see some sweet interactions between them but this will become boring very fast. Thats why I think the MC and FMC should be a couple until 5-10 chapters before the ending and use those final 5-10 chapters to show us this sweet interactions between the protagonist to end the story. Of course, so to not make it so tedious that the protagonist can´t get together, autors should make their stories of not more than 80-100 chapters, that way the protagonist become a comple fast enough and just give us some chapters of their interactions as a couple. Unfortunately they never do anything inbetween, the protagonist become a couple to soon and the story becomes boring or they took too much to become a couple and the epilogue is too short to show us their interactions as a couple. I think a story of 80 chapters and 10 of those chapters should be epilogue is the winning formula for romcom stories.I'm just wondering where the story us going
They are already going out, this is very cute and all but what's the end goal here?
Hopefully just more of this. It’s okay for some stories to just be mindless fluff.I'm just wondering where the story us going
They are already going out, this is very cute and all but what's the end goal here?
Bruh... just look how close they are and how muck skin contact they have... If you weren't so pathetic and had women other than your mother in your life you'd know that kind of gift works just fineI mean, "incel," "basement dweller," "neckbeard," they're all used by the internet interchangeably.
Still, that doesn't give an answer. All I said was that the gift didn't feel like it's going to go well, so what warranted the attempted insult?
If you need a reason it feels like it's not going to go well, the girl's about the get a birthday gift from her boyfriend whom she JUST started dating. That gift is already lingerie, which is a bit excessive for a new relationship, and it's going to fit her perfectly, matching her three sizes, something he shouldn't have. If that doesn't come across as creepy as hell, or at least unsettling, I'll be surprised.
If you're saying that because I have investment in the story... I don't know what to tell you. I like stories. Sorry you can't find joy in them.