Hmm, interesting... honestly found some parts quite funny.
The fish girl with good eyes was nice, and the senpai was actually quite funny. Looking forward to more about the two of them. The main character fish was alright, she had some good moments. The octopus is a bit too energetic, so I was a lil annoyed, though I think she has good intentions - she’s actually tried to kiss the dude. I wonder why.
Alright, so I guess were saving what happens if a mermaid kisses someone that they don’t love for a dramatic reveal, then. That’s fine. Could be interesting if played right!