Watashi no Hatsukoi wa Hazukashisugite Darenimo Ienai - Vol. 4 Ch. 27

[legendaryswordsman]

I think this manga would work better as a hentai. I'm willing to except really bizarre, nonsensical, totally not believable actions and discissions, if it leads to graphic lesbian (and/or futa) sex. But when the sex gets toned down to just ecchi, and the author tries to flesh out more of the character's feelings and motivations, the whole thing falls apart.

Part of the appeal of incest in fiction, is that it's taboo. The siblings are too in love, or too horny for each other; and must fight against and overcome their family and friends' rejections. Making the 2nd sister totally okay with incest, and wanting a piece of the pie, would be hot in a hentai. But if you think about it for more than a couple of seconds, it's retarded. I feel like the story is moving in the direction of more and more of the characters being okay with incest; except for Chiaki. That's not enough push back for such a huge taboo. It trivializes it; which makes the story boring.

At the same time, we get all of this debate and self doubt on incest from Chiaki. So the author wants depth; but also wants incest to not be a big deal. Pick one or the other. The story can't have it both ways. Either incest is a big deal, or it's not. If it's not a big deal, then drop all the introspection and debate. Make it purely horny and go graphic.

That is very thoughtful and well said. The sister is clearly main romance route, but it looks like author isn't going through with it, that would be fine if we weren't baited this who series I feel. A series that is struggling with it's identity not sure what it wants to be

 

[Kaz_umu]

I don't think that's the issue, there are now 3 chapters left in series so should be focused on end game and getting her romance, this chapter made no advancements in that, felt like nonsense and science sister just saying silly things

Seriously? Well that's a bummer.

 

[rotationplus]

"Publication: 2024, Completed"
huuuuuuuuuh but it's far from being completed, no?
From the last page, it seems that the nest chapter is coming in September (October issue)?
It's just okay so...

I agree. The whole "genderswap" genre is just asking for hentai. Or at least, something much more graphical than "Suggestive".

not the whole genre. until i become me, for one.

 

[Maimuni9]

I think this manga would work better as a hentai. I'm willing to except really bizarre, nonsensical, totally not believable actions and discissions, if it leads to graphic lesbian (and/or futa) sex. But when the sex gets toned down to just ecchi, and the author tries to flesh out more of the character's feelings and motivations, the whole thing falls apart.

Part of the appeal of incest in fiction, is that it's taboo. The siblings are too in love, or too horny for each other; and must fight against and overcome their family and friends' rejections. Making the 2nd sister totally okay with incest, and wanting a piece of the pie, would be hot in a hentai. But if you think about it for more than a couple of seconds, it's retarded. I feel like the story is moving in the direction of more and more of the characters being okay with incest; except for Chiaki. That's not enough push back for such a huge taboo. It trivializes it; which makes the story boring.

At the same time, we get all of this debate and self doubt on incest from Chiaki. So the author wants depth; but also wants incest to not be a big deal. Pick one or the other. The story can't have it both ways. Either incest is a big deal, or it's not. If it's not a big deal, then drop all the introspection and debate. Make it purely horny and go graphic.

Work better is subjective. There are tradeoffs for making it hentai or just ecchi. For one, it's unique this way. If you want to jerk ur dih rheb there are thousands of incest hentai elsewhere

 

[AncientWatcher]

This is what happens when people have no morals. Goddamnit, Yuuko!