Watashi no Kokoro wa Oji-san de Aru - Ch. 17

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when I saw the last chapter I had to read ahead in the novel, definitely a few interesting chapters ahead of us.
 
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I see. The answer to racism is violence. That is the only language that'll get through.
Reminded me that the answer to a lack of gun control is racism. Guns got locked up quickly in the US when the Black Panthers and other groups armed themselves.

What a screwed up world this is. On that note, there are also laws in place to prevent women from having certain types of hair accessories. They had sharp blades used as hair pins too protect themselves at one point. Those were outlawed. Misogyny apparently also works.
 
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On page 19 this sentence: "Even after what we put you through... you're not hurt."
is actually: "We did something terrible and we were not hurt"

Also please stick closer to the actual meaning if it's written as "Yes" please don't turn it into "O-Okay..."


@PersonalistX Otherwise thank you as always~ :salute:

p.s. Here I made this QR code for your kofi~

QR Code image here~

Have a nice day and see you next chapter~
I was trying too hard thinking about how to make the dialogue more natural because I feel It's doesn't fit nicely, so that kind of thing happened, will fix it right away

Anywho Tq~
 
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Noticed you use "Korin" for the 2nd FMC, in the novel it has "Collin", even in the raws of the novel it has collin, just thought i would give it a mention, apart from that little thing you are doing well so far, so keep up the good work. 😎👍
 
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Noticed you use "Korin" for the 2nd FMC, in the novel it has "Collin", even in the raws of the novel it has collin, just thought i would give it a mention, apart from that little thing you are doing well so far, so keep up the good work. 😎👍
Is that's so?

thank you!
For informing me, gonna change her Name next chapter!
 
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Thanks for updating!!

Can't wait to see what happens next with adorable Yuri-kun. Hope he's kept safe.
 

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