...the pacing feels awkward. Not even the story itself, honestly, but the panel transitions feels way to abrupt at times, without the spacing or styling that helps denote passage of time or scene changes.
It really gives an uncomfortable feeling to everything that happens. The story, at least on paper, has improved a bit at least, though either because of the translation (which honestly doesn't feel bad, more like the dialog also feels weird) or the script itself being botched because of the switch on the format.