Wazawai no Avalon: Game Saijaku no Akuyaku Debu ni Ten'i Shita kedo, Ore dake "Yasereba Tsuyokute New Game" na Sekai datta no de, Saisoku Level Up & …

[BearSenpai]

I think the pacing is killing this story. 90 chapters in and barely anything is going on.

 

[shalomasa]

Japanese authors when it comes to making Isekai stories where the mc is ugly, no redeeming traits, too passive w/ no character development and non sense plot:

 

[pankleks15]

I don't understand why the artist draws the MC with a giant head... if the art was goofy like in OP, it would be one thing, but when the MC is the only one draw like that, it looks so ugly.

He looks like a giant dwarf

 

[AzShun]

I feel bad for MC, everyone around him either useless or has ulterior moves

 

[zeltrax]

Its been fun but im out. Cool battle but meh story is not gripping enough anymore

 

[athenasmile]

Jesus. That was such a drag to read. It was a fucking chore. Interesting premise (tho not rare) with subpar plot and world-building.

 

[CreamPieGuy91]

The story isn’t that bad, however the writing and drawing if the main character is lacking. He just seems lacking in emotions and connections with other characters. Not to mention that he’s drawn differently each time, sometimes looking very disproportionate to others. They also don’t really go into his “powers” either…

 

[CreamPieGuy91]

Aww did I make the average sheep angy?
go eat some grass sheep
so you may attain a bit of intellect

Calling people “sheep” and “gig-chad” make it obvious you have no life outside of the internet.

 

[RiasatSenpai]

Calling people “sheep” and “gig-chad” make it obvious you have no life outside of the internet.

Go read a power fantasy isekai, if this isn't your cup of tea. As if we are lacking other manga's with OP isekai MC shoving their giga-chad dikk inside every enemy they can plough through

Sure?

but what does it say about you who is replying to me?
I called OP MC's cock giga-chad, but you can't even read... it's okay
Embrace it, you are a sheep, BAH BAH!!!

 

[rivenheave]

his ideal and the overall story somehow feels worse than your regular slop. lets just say mc is lost or should i say idk who's the mc anymore, idk what he want or what his comrades want, hell even idk what the villain wants anymore... since there is 2 sides: people and game people, focus thrown all over the places. the art is good tho

 

[YikesiHatesYou]

I don't know why y'all hating this manga, y'all are some fucks up in the mind, if you don't like this type of manga then go read some reincarnation slime shit or something, y'all have -6 years old brain that can't even compromise such a good story, especially their character development and limit to our main character so that the story will become interesting, I know you guys love reading some brain rotted everyday same Isekai shit, at least respect this manga, What a fkn stypid people go watch otome dori and get cucked

 

[YikesiHatesYou]

Japanese authors when it comes to making Isekai stories where the mc is ugly, no redeeming traits, too passive w/ no character development and non sense plot:

Yeah like you

 

[shalomasa]

Yeah like you

 

[everset]

I only created an account to comment here. This was the most torture reading I’ve had in a long time, it can be compared to “I have a dragon in my body” level bad. Even manhua slop has better story and character building than this, literally a big waste of time.
If you want to read this, I would advise otherwise.
build up > failure of expectations > build up > failure of expectations > build up > failure of expectations > it goes like this. The MC breaks the story itself by making his family godlike level and literally trains with a high-level room boss demon, then tries to kill others when they try to intervene in the story.
It is not a coincidence that its chosen character is a sexual assaulter bum, because only someone like that can match a character with this level of masochist mentality.
Also the funniest part is: “yea we suffering under monopolies and corporations but it wrong to rise up against them, we should do the morally right thing and ask them gently not to do it, and if someone from our side tries to break these chains we must stop him.”
Whole E class suffers from NTR mentality and they are proud of it. The main character is a retard that doesn’t understand his own existence already alters the reality they live in, and he himself says it is not the same as the game, those are real people.

 

[everset]

Also i wanted to say this: if you really want to stay in original story so bad, you have to monopoly every power item and level ground, rush so fast then get absurdly strong, then kill all of other players to not let them interrupt it. Then you can really live a quiet ntr cuck life behind the bars and get anal lubrication from bullies in school happily ever after.
but this asshole wants having his cake and eating it too. mental retardation so bad im worried about mental state of author.

 

[ShamelesslyUnemployed]

Also i wanted to say this: if you really want to stay in original story so bad, you have to monopoly every power item and level ground, rush so fast then get absurdly strong, then kill all of other players to not let them interrupt it. Then you can really live a quiet ntr cuck life behind the bars and get anal lubrication from bullies in school happily ever after.
but this asshole wants having his cake and eating it too. mental retardation so bad im worried about mental state of author.

While I wouldn't phrase it as vulgarly as you, pretty much yeah. This author is stuck between writing an actual good story about fighting back against corrupt assholes with some LitRPG flavor on the side, and then wants to also write some shitty secret OP MC plot fused with Classroom of the Elite style classes (which aren't bad, but are more than just background flavor at this point to justify why everyone is such an asshole).
The fact he wants to stay On the plot (and correct me if I'm wrong here) when its stated in the chapters right around the duel between the OG MC (Red haired guy, forgot his name) and the glasses guy (forgot his name too) that if Butao hadn't fucking gotten knocked out by the slime, that the class tension probably wouldn't be this damn high.
Such a shame - it had good potential, and good art, but the author lacks the resolve to carry it out.