Wendy the Florist - Vol. 1 Ch. 17

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Thanks for the ch

That was awkward in the end how did she end up on top when he was holding her from below.

Nice to see there relationship progress.
 
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hey we saw someone else posted a chapter and decided to release this early. because of that, this does throw our schedule off, but we'll attempt to keep our weekly releases consistent. thank you for reading! ^^
 
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Wow, okay. A couple of the fonts are all right, but most of the lines make little to no sense. Is there nobody doing editing or proofreading, or even QC for this?

I know you want to pump it out fast so you can get ahead of snipers, but if all I wanted was to look at garbled sentences and pretty pictures, I could have machine translated it myself...
 
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ah the accidental kiss that never happens in real life x'D I'm pretty sure that if someone falls on top of another, most case scenarios it's nowhere near romantic and someone ends up hurting their nose or something
 
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@RowanSpirit If you'd like to apply as a Proofreader or Quality Checker, let us know! ^^ We could (pretty much) always use the help.
 
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Thank You!😁 for the updates and @RowanSpirit were we reading the same chapter, because you might have gone blind. Go back and read the other ch 16 and then read HOLS versions. 'Nuff Said. BOOM!😘
 
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@Akera93 Right?! I'd be more concerned about a chipped tooth or swollen lip than an embarrassing, romantic moment! Lol
 
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What? how was she being tilted back and then pushed him forward and fall on him? whatever, Im glad the duke at least pointed out how weird it is to just have Ivy hanging out inside, unlike that Knight Oh that's totally normal, haven't seen this anywhere else but here, totally normal placement
 
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@JWChibi from what I understood, she tried to stand up but slipped again but this time forward

@RowanSpirit I think you commented on the wrong chapter because from what I read the sentence flow is okay and there's at most 2-3 fonts used unlike on ch 16 from the other group that used more than that and sentences didn't really make sense. At least cite which part didn't make sense and maybe HOL can correct it
 
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Why does she fall so much? I expected the story to kinda be like True Beauty (setup wise) but now she seems to be blushing at every move.... Also the way they speak (it may be the translator's discretion) but it sounds like a Jane Austen-like dialogue....
 
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Thanks for the update~^^
Btw guys why so serious?😂 I mean he is not stupid, of course he didn't believe but said "Yes" to her for now😉
 

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