Wizard of Arsenia - Ch. 5

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Hah
That escalated in the best way.
No repenting villain, consistent character.
Everyone gets beat up by strong MC, consistent character.
Mc doesn't suddenly become weak in second act, continues to beat people up, consistent character.
Oppressed people get revenge and kidnap ruler in rebellion, consistent with historical events.
Consistency is the most enjoyable thing about any story.
Find a thing your MC is good at and keep them good at it, don't flipflop.
 
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Ugghhh damn that escalated quickly.... should not you solve things more quietly to not attract attention so you can get your dragon heart more easily..
 
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hahahahaha didn't expect the father aka LORD to be kidnapped too LMFAO
 
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MC: why am I getting involved?
hhhmm, maybe, just maybe cause you made yourself the mc of the scene lolz if you would have sneaked out quietly to the backdoor, nothing would have happened (if lucia would have come with you is another question...)
 

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