Wizard's Martial World - Ch. 16

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@SilverbladeUY the Pacing is really bad tho... wo is that guy? he was in like 3 Pages of the last chapter and now they are best Friends? It just feels like there is a lot missing...
 
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the pacing is all over the place. Th mc visited 2 places and casually always meet murim guys. This is becoming ridiculous like MArvel's NYC where there are more ppl wih superpowers than citizens.
 
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The pacing really does have an issue but it just feels like an old wizard having fun with his new life.
 
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wtf just happened? it was paced fine at the start but suddenly our mc has a sworn brother and some shit's going down?
 
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@muireach he seems to be someone important to the church, so one of the more secretive members can just use resurrection
 
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The "formation" is to run in circles around them until they get dizzy?
 
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Not going to lie, they had me in the first half.

Right up to page 13 I was like this bromance is turning into some love at first sight Romeo and Juliet stuff, oh wait no, someone's here to kill them.
 
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what... now he has a brother.. when he just got a sister?!
Is this how you find new family members..
 

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