Yagiza no Yuujin - Vol. 1 Ch. 7

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*Sniff sniff*
That was so realistic. Well kinda. I really felt the little emotions in this story. The anticipation of what would happen next was killing me. Now to find something fluffy to read.
 
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I didn't expect it to end so soon. Tho thats better than stretching it out. Nice, sweet little mystery.
 
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Meh.
Majorly hampered by not investing in the relationships between the characters. Further hampered by not exploring the veranda plot device. Hampered still by not bothering to develop a central conflict, nor even a sympathetic protagonist.
3/10, if I'm being honest.
I'd be impressed if my preteen kid wrote it, and disappointed if anyone with a degree did.
 
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Probably could have used some more chapters. We barely even got to see the two who actually killed the bastard. The reveal that she killed herself would've been harder hitting if she had half as much focus as Wakatsuki.
 
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I feel like there was a lot of potential that wasn't fully explored, but I enjoyed the story anyways. Thank you for translating!
 
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im a bit lost here why did the girl want revenge on those two did she got rape or something
 
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Honjou was implied to be the girl that was most probably raped by akira, sakaki was implied to be a relative of the university teacher.
 
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@gronkle it's already fine at it is to me. It's adapated from a novel and it's not a "series". So it kinda makes sense that they made it that way. Furthermore, the story revolved only around MC and his friend, it fits the title, yagiza no yuujin.

@themoobz no, she didn't, but her sister did. Though, i doubt that her sister got raped, it could be anything worse since they didnt really specify things here.
 

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