Yamiochi Last Boss Reijou no Osananajimi ni Tensei shita. Ore ga Shindara Bad End Kakutei nanode Saikyou ni Natta kedo, Mou Yamiochi "Yandereka" shit…

[Lekmir]

Oh boy, I don't know what I expected with this one. It's generally a mess. My problem with this one is that it thinks it's self concious. There's a part in the first chapter that literally goes "I'm just a mob character so I don't have any talents nor memories. I'm average!" Meanwhile he just practices sword out of boredom and beats every adult in the village at age SEVEN. Also he can make giant swords out of thin air, recover himself to keep training, warm the weather and who knows what else. Apparently he's also so handsome that women squeal when they see him. Just a mob character alright.
He also claims to only remember things about this game and being japanese, yet he's in charge of the servants cause he "Gives good advice". The yandere was mistreated forever yet some guy she just met goes "I like you?" and she falls... Right.
Also she touches a flower and it literally dies?! Yet MC just brings it back up to life? The curse KILLS things, even PEOPLE. Does that mean that MC can reanimate the dead? Why is the curse there? Is it from birth or because she has black hair and eyes? Are there others like her? Why can she touch Arcs and not kill him, despite claiming that anything she touches dies?
There's a noble ranking system that's never explained. There's magic but that's also not explained. Can anyone just eliminate fatigue with a spell like Arcs? Also there's swarms of monsters outside the village. That's just mentioned in ONE LINE of dialogue tho.
At the third chapter everyone goes to FMC party and gets shocked by her beauty... Wasn't she considered ugly and no one wanted to be with her since they tought they'd die? Why did so many people go to her birthday? I mean sure, class system and all but people literally SLAPPED HER IN HER FACE BEFORE out of pure disgust. Also apparently her mother loathes her so she probably won't defend her if something were to happen.
And what's with the proportions of things? Super long necks, huge hands, people's noses disappear from page to page, their legs are either super long or super short under those dresses too, wtf?

 

[cuttu]

why the hand so long

 

[grshen]

Oh boy, I don't know what I expected with this one. It's generally a mess. My problem with this one is that it thinks it's self concious. There's a part in the first chapter that literally goes "I'm just a mob character so I don't have any talents nor memories. I'm average!" Meanwhile he just practices sword out of boredom and beats every adult in the village at age SEVEN. Also he can make giant swords out of thin air, recover himself to keep training, warm the weather and who knows what else. Apparently he's also so handsome that women squeal when they see him. Just a mob character alright.
He also claims to only remember things about this game and being japanese, yet he's in charge of the servants cause he "Gives good advice". The yandere was mistreated forever yet some guy she just met goes "I like you?" and she falls... Right.
Also she touches a flower and it literally dies?! Yet MC just brings it back up to life? The curse KILLS things, even PEOPLE. Does that mean that MC can reanimate the dead? Why is the curse there? Is it from birth or because she has black hair and eyes? Are there others like her? Why can she touch Arcs and not kill him, despite claiming that anything she touches dies?
There's a noble ranking system that's never explained. There's magic but that's also not explained. Can anyone just eliminate fatigue with a spell like Arcs? Also there's swarms of monsters outside the village. That's just mentioned in ONE LINE of dialogue tho.
At the third chapter everyone goes to FMC party and gets shocked by her beauty... Wasn't she considered ugly and no one wanted to be with her since they tought they'd die? Why did so many people go to her birthday? I mean sure, class system and all but people literally SLAPPED HER IN HER FACE BEFORE out of pure disgust. Also apparently her mother loathes her so she probably won't defend her if something were to happen.
And what's with the proportions of things? Super long necks, huge hands, people's noses disappear from page to page, their legs are either super long or super short under those dresses too, wtf?

1) Generally, if one were to get isekai’d with the intention of not standing out, you’d make it known that you’re average. It also seems more like he WANTS to be average rather than is LITERALLY average.

2)This is an isekai so the MC is (more often than not) probably gonna be OP.

3) Generally, kids facial proportions are literally designed to instigate maternal/paternal feelings in people. He also suffers from Generic Handsome Isekai face syndrome, so that also doesn’t really help his case.

4) yeah idk about the memory stuff. Maybe he’s supposed to remember more as the story goes on? Could be that the isekai made him lose memories? Maybe he doesnt want to remember?

5) I mean, good advice can be given regardless of skill or experience.

6) she’s been ostracized and hated by everyone around her so it would kinda make sense for her to like him if he was nice to her since its stated that no one around her treats her like a person. If you were constantly isolated and told you were a monster or have your parents hate you and then a nice guy comes along and treats you well, treats you as an equal, and doesn’t (at face value) have any ulterior motives, you’d probably also want them to stick around.

7) dark magic isekai nonsense. I think the idea isn’t that it outright kills them but rather withers them away (wether it be rotting them, draining their life energy, or draining their magic) and the mmc’s power is probably the opposite, i.e. (idk what the opposite of rotting is), giving life energy, giving magic, etc.

8) its a healing spell. Theres plenty of other fantasy stuff out there where the healing spells also help with fatigue and all that stuff. Arcs power probably counters her powers? Hopefully it gets expanded on.

9) i dont think she was literally considered ugly. I think because everyone ostracized her and hated her for her power, they added extra stuff on top to kinda ostracize her more. Plus, i don’t think many people actively paid attention to her enough to actually tell is she was pretty or not.

10) noble ranking is probably just a generic isekai noble tier list. More than likely the magic system is also just a generic isekai magic system where its part of you and you feel it out.

10.5) the monster thing is probably just a throw away line that will somehow come back in the future as a fundamental part of the main story, im calling it now

11) freaky ahh proportions

 

[tosikaz]

Oh boy, I don't know what I expected with this one. It's generally a mess. My problem with this one is that it thinks it's self concious. There's a part in the first chapter that literally goes "I'm just a mob character so I don't have any talents nor memories. I'm average!" Meanwhile he just practices sword out of boredom and beats every adult in the village at age SEVEN. Also he can make giant swords out of thin air, recover himself to keep training, warm the weather and who knows what else. Apparently he's also so handsome that women squeal when they see him. Just a mob character alright.
He also claims to only remember things about this game and being japanese, yet he's in charge of the servants cause he "Gives good advice". The yandere was mistreated forever yet some guy she just met goes "I like you?" and she falls... Right.
Also she touches a flower and it literally dies?! Yet MC just brings it back up to life? The curse KILLS things, even PEOPLE. Does that mean that MC can reanimate the dead? Why is the curse there? Is it from birth or because she has black hair and eyes? Are there others like her? Why can she touch Arcs and not kill him, despite claiming that anything she touches dies?
There's a noble ranking system that's never explained. There's magic but that's also not explained. Can anyone just eliminate fatigue with a spell like Arcs? Also there's swarms of monsters outside the village. That's just mentioned in ONE LINE of dialogue tho.
At the third chapter everyone goes to FMC party and gets shocked by her beauty... Wasn't she considered ugly and no one wanted to be with her since they tought they'd die? Why did so many people go to her birthday? I mean sure, class system and all but people literally SLAPPED HER IN HER FACE BEFORE out of pure disgust. Also apparently her mother loathes her so she probably won't defend her if something were to happen.
And what's with the proportions of things? Super long necks, huge hands, people's noses disappear from page to page, their legs are either super long or super short under those dresses too, wtf?

also I hate the "randomly have a curse without proper explanation" troupe. What? you expect reader to have emotion attachment to the character whose only identity is being hated and having a curse(?) without proper explanation of the curse originality, its like god just picks a random number and applies shits on the unlucky ones out of pure spite...heck not even a curse, she can make the flowers bloom, so its not a curse, more like a control mana flow thing? Maybe it will be mentioned later but for now the character building is pretty shallow, its the "not worth your toilet time" rating

 

[Cruentus]

There's literally no reason to pretend they were seven. Seven-year-old ladykillers don't exist. Seven-year-olds do not squee at a member of the opposite sex. I can't emphasize enough how this isn't a thing. You can't even claim the kids are imitating adult/teen behavior they've seen on TV, because this world doesn't have TV. There hasn't been time for them to learn that behavior at seven.

And then we have a three-year time-skip. Why three years? Could have done one year. Why has a count not thrown a single grand party in three years? He's not some unlanded baronet. You can't have decent standards of living in any human society without at least one celebration a year basically everyone rolls out for. I refuse to believe it. Such a culture can't exist.

Why does a ten-year-old have an hourglass figure?

The story would be strictly improved just by switching up the ages and shortening the skip. It would be so easy. It's not like the skip was really done for any purpose but giving the readers a vague idea that it'll be this many more chapters until they're "adults."

 

[grshen]

There's literally no reason to pretend they were seven. Seven-year-old ladykillers don't exist. Seven-year-olds do not squee at a member of the opposite sex. I can't emphasize enough how this isn't a thing. You can't even claim the kids are imitating adult/teen behavior they've seen on TV, because this world doesn't have TV. There hasn't been time for them to learn that behavior at seven.

And then we have a three-year time-skip. Why three years? Could have done one year. Why has a count not thrown a single grand party in three years? He's not some unlanded baronet. You can't have decent standards of living in any human society without at least one celebration a year basically everyone rolls out for. I refuse to believe it. Such a culture can't exist.

Why does a ten-year-old have an hourglass figure?

The story would be strictly improved just by switching up the ages and shortening the skip. It would be so easy. It's not like the skip was really done for any purpose but giving the readers a vague idea that it'll be this many more chapters until they're "adults."

I don’t pay attention to authors names but I remember there being one that could not draw children to save their life so they just draw adults small and im wondering if this was also done by that author…..