As far as quality goes (even if you aren't planning on sticking with it), this was better than 99% of amateur "pick this up" TLs. Like, you used the right font, no random unintentional spelling errors, text was generally centered, it all made sense, and you even did some of the sfx.
The only thing that "could use work" is some text cleaning here and there, as well as the few cases where text pressed on the edges of the bubble. That and the unnecessary T/N, but again, that's just notes for improvement. This gets a good grade regardless.