Yankee Shoujo to Tomodachi ni Naru Hanashi - Oneshot

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The same artist of A Gyaru and The Chairman at the Bathhouse
so you may support the serialization from the author via this link.

The first question is choosing the series you are responding to.
This series is the second option: 銭湯ギャルと委員長



The second question is about your gender:
Male
Female
Other
Prefer not to answer



Third question is about your age, e.g. 20s, 30s...



Fourth question is:
I liked it
I didn't like it.



Then what did you like about the work:
Story
Characters
World/Setting
Artwork
Sense of Humor
I didn't like anything
Other _____________________



Then basically the same thing but for what you didn't like (bottom two are kind of switched):
Story
Characters
World/Setting
Artwork
Sense of Humor
Other _____________________
There wasn't anything I didn't like



Then there are a couple of open-ended questions.



What scenes left an impression on you?
_____________________



Please share any other comments
_____________________


You don't need to answer any of the open-ended questions.
 
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extremely cute but like others have awready said, feels unfinished. its a weird moment to end on, theres no like resolution to him seeing hachitora as ramyurin. still tho, yknow, series where they eventually kiss please and thanks <3
 
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Did it not finish processing? "A Gyaru and The Chairman at the Bathhouse" is already a half-finished product, but this is even more so. They not only cut mid-plotline, they cut mid-scene. I enjoy the gap premise in both, but the author really needs to work on actually delivering a story in his works.
 
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Ok. Give me more.
I know it's a oneshot, but did it really have to end there?
Lovely story (though the whole gap concept looks a bit cliché), the school stuff appears to be quite engaging. It would cool to have this serialized!
It Actually is a Promising setting , 'twouldn't be Un-welcome if this were to be serialized.
WHYYYYYYYYYY


one shot? How about I one shot myself

Did you vote already?

https://forums.mangadex.org/threads...h-a-yankee-girl-oneshot.2367075/post-27166473
 
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Somehow it has ended at a weird point - it still could be treated as a first chapter in series, but not as standalone oneshot
The previous job about bathhouse was much better as a oneshot and I liked it much more in general than this one
 

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