Yasashii Kare to Fukigen Kitsune no Renai Jijou

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Romance develops kinda too quick and kinda too fast, but it's not bad, strong 7
 
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This one would have been distinctly better as shounen-ai, perhaps? Their relationship-building, starting from people who don't get along to well, though to friends, is convincing. That being the basis for a budding romance kind of works, too, although it's only barely given enough time and reason to make sense...

But the more dirty developments felt a bit forced. And sort of seemed to advance the story in a fashion rather awkwardly perpendicular to the preceding plot and other bits of character development, somewhat to the story's detriment. Or so I felt. Obviously I'm being the picky one here, based on the other comments XD
 

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