I did like the concept of this story, but recently it really has been kinda 'eeh~'. Particularly with how it keeps on cutting to and away and jumping around, flashbacking the combat scenes, and hopping to to distant pov's, and overall pausing the combat all the time and I have no memory of what exactly happened during the fight and all attempts at giving backstories or exposition or emotional weight instead only has me go "hurry past this, we are still during an action scene that was left unfinished".
etc.
ps: the fact that it is one PART of a chapter per month at best doesn't help either