Yotaka Futatabi - Ch. 35 - The Hawk Has Landed

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Bro did you link yourself
I thought I'd share this old comment I made that captures what we're all seeing/feeling about this new fat character.
It links into another older comment that describes "peak thiccness" with an image and a comment.

Of course not every women's peak thiccness is the same. Some can imperceptibly balloon far more than others, and some have peaks that are fairly similar to their baseline ("healthy") body size/weight (peaking too quickly).

This author has a tendency to push juuuuuust past that line.



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Bro did you just link to a previous comment of you linking to a previous comment rather than just linking the relevant comment?
 
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It could be funny, if she ended up breaking 2 factions and caused massive unemployment after the event.
 
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They are professional killers, emphasis on professional. They aren't some thugs in the street. They will enact inhumation on their targets with minimal collateral damage.
Inhumation... are you a Discworld fan maybe?
 
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Okay, this is the chapter that jumps the shark.

The premise that the old lady would walk her forces through the front door, presumably knowing that 80% - 90% of them would be obliterated, is nonsensical. Immersion shattering. Terrible writing. The artist should find an actual writer to work with, because this art deserves better than this trash writing.
Well, the whole notion the the hitmen are killing each other at the rate of tens of bodies a week and somehow the society works as expected otherwise is a bit silly.

I mean, if the murderers for hire kill dozens of each other in their free time for reasons, how many hundred of innocent outsiders would they be killing as part of their actual (wretched) business? Clearly vast organizations with many bases and hundreds of cannon fodder disposable personnel to run through needs to do ludicrous number of paid murders to keep itself running.

The whole idea of hitmen wars with Hot Shots Part Deux-tier body counts is silly.
 
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