Youheidan no Ryouriban - Ch. 2.1

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Ah yes discount hopefully not rapist Griffith is the mercenary leader. His Guts is a Japanese cook, man I hope there is no Behelits here.
 
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So they’re doing what the novel did in manga form?
im guessing we’ll get 1 chapter of the full moment
then the following POV chapte for characters?
 
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"He intends to show his intentions through actions rather than words"
Oh come on, this has to be the dumbest reason to have a mute character I've ever seen. This story has promise, but I don't think it's going to reach its potential with clumsy writing like that.
 
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Honestly I think the author should have started with this as it makes chapter one make more sense with the world building and how desperate they were for a good meal

Thanks for the chapter!
 
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The novel is written this way. Every chapter is in parts from different pov.
Honestly I think the author should have started with this as it makes chapter one make more sense with the world building and how desperate they were for a good meal

Thanks for the chapter!
This is what I mean when I said this feels like a weird place to put the chapter; this makes more sense as the first chapter than the second.
 
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This is what I mean when I said this feels like a weird place to put the chapter; this makes more sense as the first chapter than the second.
It is the first chapter in the novel. The manga swapped them for w.e reason.
 
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It's a little forced. Surely there'd be someone among hundreds of mercenaries who knows how to cook a tasty meal.
 

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