Yume to Koi dewa Tsuriawanai - Ch. 4 - Disgusting

[SilentMea]

I think this whole manga is really lovely and I'm gonna enjoy the ride... even if this breaks my heart

 

[Lunkli]

This was a beautiful chapter. Probably one of the best individual manga chapters I've read.

 

[Vulkuvier]

Kira speedrunning from toxic yuri to mutual love in a couple chapters girl be moving fast. So is this gonna end up a 1 or 2 volume set up or do we still got my fuel in the tank?

what ive seen from the mangaka it seems like its planned to be a shorter series

 

[milkysyn]

An actually good backstory, AND THIS WAS FROM A ONESHOT!??? Author, you have my applause.

 

[Ado_007]

Honestly, it's crazy getting a recontextualization of everything from Kira's perspective. Definitely love the parallels between Hikaru and Kairi regarding their perspectives on love before they started their relationship. And I honestly think it's really sad that Kira has realized that she likes Hikaru romantically but is disgusted with herself for her initial motivations of starting a relationship with her just to see her fall. This series is amazing!

 

[gold_0]

Feelings realization so fast it gave me whiplash

Thank you for the chapter!!

 

[rkbrillantes]

I don't want the manga to end just yet. I just want to observe the toxic/wholesome relationship these two have. Also, I really do love how the manga shows us how Kira's falling more and more in love with her, even more than Hikaru it seems.

 

[jdmarco]

This chapter is so great that I am one chapter away from writing a three paragraph essay about this manga, just like in "My Girlfriend is Not Here Today."

 

[yoorie19]

Solid chapter 🔥✍️

 

[Roodypatooti]

She wanted toxic yuri but ended up in a healthy relationship instead.

These 2 are so fucking cute together.

 

[Ravenna-rei]

I wanna know more about her mom.
Perhaps she's got a gf of her own.

 

[kkakasih]

omg so good this will fuel me for weeks, and the anticipation of next chapter gonna keep me alive for a while

 

[himi-cat]

An actually good backstory, AND THIS WAS FROM A ONESHOT!??? Author, you have my applause.

The oneshot had basically no deeper backstory or characterisation, and was short enough to not get overly caught up in itself, so going from there to here was relatively easy - the setting and character development is almost entirely built for this serialisation.

None of which is a criticism - a oneshot should be tightly focused, only presenting the bits that are important. A oneshot is a short story, and the key thing about short stories is that they're short - if there's too much in the final version of the story then it ends up muddy and confused, the true art (and greatest challenge) of the short story is cutting out everything that doesn't explicitly need to be there, without cutting any of the bits that do need to be there. Which really is amazingly difficult to do well . . . but it also leaves things very open when it comes to a longer work inspired by a short story done well - there's so much less detail tying you down and constraining what you can do.

 

[Yurisivel]

Role reversal tag incoming.

 

[avatarivn]

This chapter went to some dark places.
Thank goodness everything will be alright with gay love and tons of segg later on.

 

[agolloh]

Wow this is so wonderfully written, been a while since I've seen such impactful writing

 

[ezzhead]

Comedy?

No.

 

[Colonel-Picquart]

the past three chapters have been so fluffy and sweet that I almost forgot that this Yuri comes with skull and crossbones labels.
All it took to being back that magic toxicity of the first chapter was putting us in Kira's head and boy is homegirl messed up!
Good thing she has a gf who doesn't know the meaning of low effort.

 

[vixawi1793]

Pretty art and awesome pace. I really enjoy reading this so thanks for the TL!

 

[WindMil]

Honestly, if a few more things happened to Kira that really hurt her she might’ve gotten really twisted as was shown in this chapter, but I’m glad she hadn’t yet crossed the line of no return and that theres room for character growth. I’m excited to see how it happens