Yumemiru Danshi wa Genjitsushugisha - Vol. 2 Ch. 10

[Qwormuli]

Man, I'm usually fairly adept at reading poetry, but at points I'm not sure if that's even prose at this point.

The mismatch of context and content of the lines just crazy. I appreciate the thought, but why choose to do it like this?

 

[bakanisan]

I'm sorry, either the author couldn't write a comprehensible book or the tl is somehow... weird. I can't pinpoint the cause but the word choice, the sentence structure and the overall flow of the conversation just seems incoherent. It's like the characters are playing hidden 4d chess and they're jumping all over the places and we can only occasionally have a glimpse into the conversation.

I've noticed this happens with other manhwa series tl-ed by the group as well.

 

[Ikarugashi]

The more this story progresses.
The more I dislike the fmc

 

[HYBRID_BEING]

Man, the translation is rough, but what's worse is that lines are not always in their corresponding text boxes
This time on page 27. The part after "Dungeon he said?!" is swapped with Natsukawa's words in second panel (though, they are hard to decipher anyway). Then, MC's words are from the previous page, and instead it should've been something like "Would it be okay with such a number of people?"
Also, can't say i understood a single line in the dialog between MC and Kai, but i guess it boiled down to the fact that Kai was trying to tell that MC's sis is worried about him in her own way?