Yumemiru Danshi wa Genjitsushugisha - Vol. 2 Ch. 10

[Qwormuli]

Man, I'm usually fairly adept at reading poetry, but at points I'm not sure if that's even prose at this point.

The mismatch of context and content of the lines just crazy. I appreciate the thought, but why choose to do it like this?

 

[bakanisan]

I'm sorry, either the author couldn't write a comprehensible book or the tl is somehow... weird. I can't pinpoint the cause but the word choice, the sentence structure and the overall flow of the conversation just seems incoherent. It's like the characters are playing hidden 4d chess and they're jumping all over the places and we can only occasionally have a glimpse into the conversation.

I've noticed this happens with other manhwa series tl-ed by the group as well.