Yuusha ga Shinda! - Vol. 17 Ch. 175 - Escape from the Capital

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OMG i read so fast, this must be the power of NAKED KNEESOCKS!!!
 
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That was a great world building.
Not only we learn the history of this world
But we also got a multiverse
 
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Yay try to invade skill taker world gonna lose you necromancy and associated skill really you need to test first also weapon that can kill higher beings exist like Stargate sg1 usually made by the same old civilization.
 

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@Seihanda , in my Opinion , the worldbuilding is 5-6/10 , the multiverse troop is used much , so it nothing special , the crystal , the "mana" , the people are all exactly the same in this world , they wear the same clothes / same thing , some acceptable , some not , it fairly normal world building
 
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@da @Seihanda is not a multiverse my dudes this is the simulation hypothesis, since they're talking about how beings of a higher dimension created them (this manga's world) and beings of and even higher dimension created those others and so on, is far from being the same
 
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@da Well for me, what makes a good worldbuilding isn't about how common it is in other stories, but how the story is influenced with it. For example, one story could have the most amazing and unique worldbuilding with a long history of how it came to be but it will be worth nothing if the story isn't influenced by it to the point you could just remove all that history and nothing would change.
 
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Agreed, but harsher. This is like a 3-4/10 at best to me, I haven't seen a single thing that sets this apart from better manga, not the art, not the story, not the characters. The content is mediocre and uninspired and the execution is poor. Plus, the gratuitous ecchi kinda sticks out as a crutch.
It's like someone took Seven Deadly Sins, knocked down the story by a few pegs, and shoved in a bunch of ecchi. It's what parodys mock. It's like something trying to present itself as a comedy and not taking itself seriously, but really is trying to be what it's joking about, whether it's aware of it or not.
 
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I'd like to point out that as seen on page 12, the one driving the airship is the Horse.
I don't really know what else I was expecting. Sasuga Horse Bro.
 
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To be fair to this series, it's actually explaining most of its ecchi and gratuitous moments with in-universe logic that works with its overall world. That's pretty significant. The excuses it's made to allow for these things aren't small, either, and are really creative. Touka's near-teleporting kneesocks thing is not only explained in-universe, it is also an ability used by other characters (including villains); he just uses it somewhat more creatively, and more to his desires. Outside of Touka's perverse creative spin on these abilities, the world is pretty consistent and serious about them. Character's abilities (outside of mana crystals) aren't exclusive to them, and everybody is operating outside of the same ballpit that has more or less remained the same since the earliest chapters (outside of one or two key moments).
The world its built might be cliche, but its efforts in worldbuilding are impressive and can't be understated. It's not perfect, no, but there are very few stories in existence that have fantastic and consistent worldbuilding.
 

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@NthML but I hate the power escalation of higher dimensions because it make them stronger and stronger and that reminds me of cliche shonen anime
@Coulver you kinda right, but what I mean it they still using the same thing from the book over and over again, if give the reader that we all know this thing by now and make it the simple formula
@Yautja you right, the jokes are repetitive, poor execution, over much ecchi and not need that much, bucket of information ( told the reader about information, i dunno the author execution good or bad ( panties ,thicc grab or boob grab , we can make use of it ) , the artwork is average, same face syndrome in 3 types of characters , young , old , or something , but still showing something simple express emotion and small details @TaintedAardvark

the formula of most story are like this : normal days of the protagonist, something changes it forever , hero save the world to come back to daily lifes again , plot twist :some good guys are actually the bad guys , bad guys motivation is nothing news , the monkey villain guy are take over higher dimensional , which is very cliche and feel no relateable to the reader , the brat demon 1000 years old guy is relateable but his asspull backstory out of nowhere is bad , I'm feel like most dead character in the series will be revive with plot armor because Apex magic and things , sorry it my english grammar is bad
 
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Wow. People are so spoiled nowadays. Everyone attempts to be a critic by randomly generating phrases including "cliche", "mediocre", "overused", "generic" in random order and applying to story, characters, writing or anything else really.
I say it's hilarious because those critics do exactly the same they blame the piece they commenting on.
Also randomly spitting terminology without making a point.
 
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"Chill, bro" Diego said.
And he still have that right arm which can seal magic or something. And that's going to be his trump card or add more weapons into necromancer's power.

I'm glad to know, this story is far from over.
 

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