Yuusha no Haha desu ga, Maou-gun no Kanbu ni Narimashita - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - Justice for All

[MangaDex]

 

[SnowMexican1]

Okay, I'm really digging this. I'm hoping we get to see more of that Lamia executive.
Anyway, keep up the good work.

 

[Cyliasta]

Okay, I'm really digging this. I'm hoping we get to see more of that Lamia executive.
Anyway, keep up the good work.

With stockings, i hope

 

[SnowMexican1]

With stockings, i hope

Ah, another person of culture I see

 

[ciera]

Thank you for the chapter

 

[Su1phur]

I see your group is going to continue with scanlating, and I'm all for it. But please do spend a little bit more effort on typesetting, and proofreading if possible. I'm not going to comment on MTL as I also use it, but please proofread the translation.

 

[Jayswing103]

I wonder, is there going to be romance? And if so, will the ML be the elf or the demon king?

 

[Jamussor]

I really like how it's not that the Demon's are necessarily "good people" or "opposite" to humans, but "neutral" and trying to live their lives.

 

[Cyliasta]

I see your group is going to continue with scanlating, and I'm all for it. But please do spend a little bit more effort on typesetting, and proofreading if possible. I'm not going to comment on MTL as I also use it, but please proofread the translation.

Would you please point out what i should be making better?
For the Typesetting i am focusing on being easily readable.
As for Proofreading, i am doin the TL, passing throught a script and then when typesetting on the page, i am comparing all the bubbles on the page to make most sense of the text as so to naturally connect the conversation.
If you could please point out where it wasn't good, i would like to know so i can do better next chapter

 

[casual_reader1234]

I like this set up a lot. Logical and grounded. I expect that the son (hero) will ultimately turn against the ones training him when he finds out that they lied to him about his mother's death, and that the demons saved her. That's +1 for the demons for trust, -1 for the humans. I'm hoping he'll see the big picture and think for himself instead of the usual "the truth is right in front of me but I've been building up this hatred for 10 years now so I'm not gonna change my mind without doing something stupid first".

 

[Syanalassa]

Would you please point out what i should be making better?
For the Typesetting i am focusing on being easily readable.
As for Proofreading, i am doin the TL, passing throught a script and then when typesetting on the page, i am comparing all the bubbles on the page to make most sense of the text as so to naturally connect the conversation.
If you could please point out where it wasn't good, i would like to know so i can do better next chapter

I have a minor suggestion with text that goes directly on the background or has a speech bubble that doesnt have a white background (like the first bubble in the previous chapter) give the text a pixel or two of white outline as this will make it much easier to read
it other wise keep up the good work